TITLE: Simpatico AUTHOR: veuki RATING: R FANDOM: lotrips PAIRING: Viggo Mortensen/Dominic Monaghan DISCLAIMER: This is a work of fiction. I don't own anyone. This never happened. SUMMARY: Viggo has always listened.
He wonders if Viggo sees him as half a person, not really there; shimmering vaguely translucent, only one foot on the ground.
I absolutely love that... and it doesn't happen often when I read fanfics, that I actually feel the emotions characters are experiencing. Like in this case... it ranged from a kind of awkwardness and embarrassment to this happy satisfied kinda thing.
Yes. There needs to be more of fic like this. Yes indeed. I'll give you the cliched "Would be better feedback if I was coherent line." But it was perfect. The whole seriousness of it, still undertoned with that light hearted silliness we all love so much. Ahhhh. Thank you.
I'm not coherent enough to write the fb this deserves (and I know that's a lame, cliche and I apologize but it's true). It's beautiful. Simply beautiful. I need to go read it again and just savor each word and nuance for a while.
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Absolutely breathtaking.
~Alisa
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He wonders if Viggo sees him as half a person, not really there; shimmering vaguely translucent, only one foot on the ground.
I absolutely love that... and it doesn't happen often when I read fanfics, that I actually feel the emotions characters are experiencing. Like in this case... it ranged from a kind of awkwardness and embarrassment to this happy satisfied kinda thing.
Well, well done. (And I love the pairing ^^)
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Yes. There needs to be more of fic like this. Yes indeed. I'll give you the cliched "Would be better feedback if I was coherent line." But it was perfect. The whole seriousness of it, still undertoned with that light hearted silliness we all love so much. Ahhhh. Thank you.
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Beautiful.
Thank you *s*
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