Fic: Eternity - Blind Fic Challenge (Part B)

[vic_sim]

Title: Eternity - Part B

Author: vic_sim

Beta: a friend who seriously needs to get herself an lj acc

Disclaimer: I don’t own anything.

Summary: Life is not always what we see. We all need someone to be there for us.

Warning: Character death.
A/N: This is for the Blind Pic Challenge held on

Comments

[emi84]

This is sad and good at the same time. You know, when I first read the Part A, somewhere in my mind telling me that the end should be like this but I really hope that may guessing isn't right.. But then when I go to part B, man, seem true. It's really heartbreaking..

It's sad but I really love it..

[vic_sim]

I was addicted to writing death-fics during my hiatus.

I'm glad you love it. ^^

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[hangeng4ever]

spot for me coz im greedy^^

[hangeng4ever]

whoa, u killed kyu/wook/hae? -gasps-

teukie talking to non-existent siblings was eerie! scared me...ah, but u know me, im a scaredie-cat^^

[vic_sim]

I know. I couldn't believe that too.
-wails-
It's the second time I killed Kyu.
-sniffs-

I wanted to make it more eerie...But I couldn't figure out how.
I might go back to this plot again sometime in the future.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[hangeng4ever]

eh? more eerie...i dont think i'll be able to read it if it's scarier than this...-covers eyes-

[sujumorphine]

oh my ;____; this was so sad and heartbreaking! ;__; i somehow managed to predict something's wrong when i read "there's only one problem? what? donghae, kyuhyun, ryeowook" but i'm still shocked ;___;
pook teukie. illusioning his brothers were still alive. living in denial of his brother's death ;___;
the ending was epic....... idk, but i love the ending. it brings tears to my eyes ;__;
poor teukie U_U

[sujumorphine]

*poor. ah stupid fingers making stupid mistake >.<"

[vic_sim]

-hands tissues-

It was hard writing the illusions at the start without revealing that they were illusions. but I'm glad you love the ending. That's my fave part of it.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[anonymous]

nice ff...

i'm a silent reader here..

ur english is so good...

where do u come from??

[vic_sim]

thank you for reading and commenting!

[tees2mai]

O.O

OKAY THT WAS CREEPY i had to read the ending like 7 times before i got it....
im slow.. they died right? oh god..

oh god...
this was real good!

[vic_sim]

nods
they died

Thank you for reading and commenting!