Janeway: Generations Part 4

[vicar_dibley]

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In an attempt to cool her temper Phoebe found her way to the small pond behind the house where she and Kathryn had often bathed when they were kids. Sitting down under an old willow tree Phoebe thought about her quarrel with the Admiral wondering what it was about that woman that always got her off so quickly. It wasn’t that the Admiral had been

Comments

Love the ladies

[dakota45]

Great story, love the combative, slowly simmering attraction between the Admiral and the youngest Janeway. No doubt there are more fireworks to come.
Gretchen and Kate are just like a couple of teenagers on their first date.
I'm very interested to see how this story unfolds.
Keep up the great writing, looking forward to more updates.

Re: Love the ladies

[vicar_dibley]

thanks so much for reading:)

yup, absolutely.

kate and gretchen are sweet, aren´t they?

the admiral has always intrigued me. i hope you are going to like what i´m going to do with all of them:)

[jintymac]

Another great update!

I love the way that Phoebe and Alynna's interactions are becoming more friendly and intimate, their relationship is developing nicely ;-)

Kate & Gretchen are so sweet together and I loved how giddy they were on their first real date.

Looking forward to the next update!

[vicar_dibley]

glad you think so:)

rest assured that there will be a few minor setbacks, because there has to be. given their different tempers.

they are, i really love them:)

well, then, tune in next week;)

[sanpo]

Ouuu ! you ve made it sooo perfect ! im dying for more !

[vicar_dibley]

thanks so much:)

there will be, no worry;)

[carinjo]

just a quick thank you for this story. my internet went down...again and this story kept my going on my phone (but now that's gone down and the internet is back up again) *sigh*

update soon pretty please.

[vicar_dibley]

what a horrible thing to happen. i can´t imagine being without it for a longer time. what can i say i´m a fan fiction junkee:)

i will, i promise;)

Review

[phantomsqueaky]

Fantastic chapter! I loved the little drawing scene. Is it me or does the Admiral have a habbit of scarring Phoebe at times? Is it me or do I sence a little romance brewing between the Admiral and the artist? Good, very good. Loved the first date bit. The ending was fantastic. What happens next?