I just stumbled across this fic and already, it's really engaging. I love the different dynamics between all of the women, particularly Phoebe and Alynna. Phoebe unfortunately seems way too childish to make this work; I have to frequently remind myself that she's supposed to be in her late thirties or early forties at this time. Because she really just seems like a teenager. I hope that you do develop Phoebe's character a bit more. :o)
Fantastic chapter. Aylnna had a wife?! Ahh, that explains a thing or two. I am glad that Lwaxana is there to help, but will it do any good? Will the Admiral be able to let go of Laura? Will she and Phoebe take a chance? What about the attck on them? Despite Aylnna stupid word will she be able to protect both herself and Phoebe? What happens next?
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i have to admit that phoebe is around 30 or 35 in my imagination. i didn´t mention her age though, did i?
"I hope that you do develop Phoebe's character a bit more."
well, i guess so. because the dynamics will change as well a bit.
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yes but i like that:)
well, it is already written and only needs to be proof read. i will be up tomorrow.
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