OMG!!!! *grins widely* Well done, well done!!! This is a truly awesome chapter, well written and I love how you were able to get all of the different characters feelings in while at the same time showing the shallow, power plays of a fashion week. Though (and maybe I need to go back and re-read the begining chapters) I don't totally understand Nigel's animosity towards Andrea. I shall be waiting as patiently as I can for your next update.
thank you, thank you, thank you:) i´m truly touched by your wonderful comment. i was i bit insecure before i posted it. well nigel has an issue which will become clearer in the next chapter. at will up as soon as possible.
This was such a lovely update and their dinner at the museum was absolutely beautiful. It was nice to see Miranda treated like a special woman and not just an editor ;-)
Please tell me you're going to update soon though as that last line is a killer lol!
I have to agree with Caroline, your Andy has awesome ideas for dates.
The dinner is an incredibly effective scene. One location, one event, and you embed so much information: the progress of their relationship; the twins' increasing esteem for Andy; and the way that in her own world, Andy has power to make things happen. All that and you give Andy the perfect line: "So, here we are, between the real dragons, having a relaxed dinner without those snakes snapping at your ankle."
The only wee drawback to this is that I may never be able to visit the Wiener Naturhistorische Museum again without thinking of Miranda... I'll probably trip on the stairs and royally embarrass myself.
thank you. i had big doubts about it. i´m constantly worried that i rush things or bore people to death with my pace. or that you think `please give me a break´. i am so happy it worked so well for you. the line just popped up and i found it suitable:)
that´s not a bad thing at all, think of the wonderful building itself. it would have made a fantastic surrounding for the dinner.
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i´m truly touched by your wonderful comment.
i was i bit insecure before i posted it. well nigel has an issue which will become clearer in the next chapter.
at will up as soon as possible.
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What Miranda is going to answer?
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well...
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Please tell me you're going to update soon though as that last line is a killer lol!
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maybe sooner than you anticipate.
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I have to agree with Caroline, your Andy has awesome ideas for dates.
The dinner is an incredibly effective scene. One location, one event, and you embed so much information: the progress of their relationship; the twins' increasing esteem for Andy; and the way that in her own world, Andy has power to make things happen. All that and you give Andy the perfect line: "So, here we are, between the real dragons, having a relaxed dinner without those snakes snapping at your ankle."
The only wee drawback to this is that I may never be able to visit the Wiener Naturhistorische Museum again without thinking of Miranda... I'll probably trip on the stairs and royally embarrass myself.
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thank you. i had big doubts about it. i´m constantly worried that i rush things or bore people to death with my pace. or that you think `please give me a break´. i am so happy it worked so well for you. the line just popped up and i found it suitable:)
that´s not a bad thing at all, think of the wonderful building itself. it would have made a fantastic surrounding for the dinner.
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i´m so happy you liked it so much. i was really and utterly worried about the whole thing. what can i say, i´m such a horrible sucker for romance.
i try as best as i can and i´m happy when i succeed and it gives such pleasure to my readers:)
take care!
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