This was just beautifully done. I was only supposed to read a couple of paragraphs and then head out for my run. Save the rest for later. Yeah right. I couldn't walk away. The boys just come across as so 'true', your writing is smooth and engaging, and you tugged at my heartstrings the whole way through. The whole story has a wonderfully gentle and loving feel to it. Thank you so much for sharing. I will definitely be keeping my eyes open for your next story.
Oh...and if your ears should start to burn that's just me cursing you while I'm out running now that it's 10 degrees hotter and the humidity is up. LOL
Re: Wonderful storyvicious_tradeAugust 6 2009, 04:13:17 UTC
I'm very sorry for making you run in the heat - but totally grateful for the kind words! I'm glad that I wrote the boys in a believable way for you. Nothing worse than reading a story that is completely out of character.
Thank you for reading and I'm glad it was somewhat worth it!
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Thanks for reading!
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Oh...and if your ears should start to burn that's just me cursing you while I'm out running now that it's 10 degrees hotter and the humidity is up. LOL
Nah...it was worth it.
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Thank you for reading and I'm glad it was somewhat worth it!
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