Sam thought screwing around with Dean would be easy - he was finally getting what he wanted, and if Dean didn't feel the same way? Well, that didn't matter. He'd play his part and everything would be fine.
I read the sentence above in the summary and went "What?" Then I started to read. This is really well-written and enjoyable. Normally when Dean talks this much in a story I start to feel like he's out of character, but you pulled it off admirably. Enjoyed this.
god, this is how i want sam and dean to be ALL THE TIME. i love love love it SO FREAKING MUCH. dean's perfect and the way you've written unsure!sam? god, i kept switching between saying "awwhh" and wanting to clobber him for not realising what he already had [and always will have].
I need someone to explain to me why I haven't been reading your stuff before this!
This is fantastic! You've got Dean's wisecracking and swagger down pat, not to mention flaily!Sam and his slow-to-catch-up self. And the jealousy? Yes please! And the acknowledgement of their feelings is touching without being sappy.
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I read the sentence above in the summary and went "What?" Then I started to read. This is really well-written and enjoyable. Normally when Dean talks this much in a story I start to feel like he's out of character, but you pulled it off admirably. Enjoyed this.
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god, this is how i want sam and dean to be ALL THE TIME. i love love love it SO FREAKING MUCH. dean's perfect and the way you've written unsure!sam? god, i kept switching between saying "awwhh" and wanting to clobber him for not realising what he already had [and always will have].
LOVE THIS STORY.
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This is fantastic! You've got Dean's wisecracking and swagger down pat, not to mention
flaily!Sam and his slow-to-catch-up self. And the jealousy? Yes please! And the acknowledgement
of their feelings is touching without being sappy.
So great!!!
*runs off to read everything you've ever written*
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