Prompt: Loyalty

Feb 17, 2012 17:57

Prompt: Loyalty
Words: 100 102 - typo spotted by Duke Brymin!

Harry had always known that loyalty meant different things to different people.

In the Chamber of Secrets, his loyalty to Dumbledore had saved his life, during the Horcrux hunt, his loyalty to his quest almost cost him his best friend and during the final battle, his loyalty towards the ( Read more... )

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dukebrymin February 17 2012, 18:38:21 UTC
Are you missing a word up there?

"his loyalty towards almost cost him"

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vickystarfish February 17 2012, 18:57:38 UTC
o s**t! yeah there is! it's supposed to read "His loyalty to his quest alomst cost him..."

my apologies. busy afternoon, as you have read - and that one caused me trouble!

thanks for pointing it out. i wonder who else will notice. they've been posted to FF already!

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doraeazure February 21 2012, 01:33:03 UTC
I really like the last paragraph! :)

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vickystarfish February 23 2012, 18:21:25 UTC
again, ty! personally my favourite is probably the middle one, but i guess the last one is more about a bright future, so i can understand your sentiment! x

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