[fic] his little surprise

Apr 09, 2011 17:22

“God what happened to you?”

Yunho was in a middle of a photo shoot when he received a text saying his lover has just arrived back in Seoul. As soon as he was done for the night, he rushed and went straight to the latter’s condo, only to be greeted with a sick-looking Jaejoong.

Yunho dropped the surprise gift he was holding, walked closer and ( Read more... )

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rurutia88 April 10 2011, 09:37:55 UTC
sweeeeeeet~~~ i'm melting....
moar??

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vicshi April 11 2011, 06:50:35 UTC
i'll try, thank u :)

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am3thyst April 10 2011, 18:03:00 UTC
Awww, this was so cute, especially the last line. I hope that Jaejoong is able to rest a little bit after all his hard work and able to get some TLC from Yunho before their Taipei stop.

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am3thyst April 10 2011, 18:03:49 UTC
Hope you will write the continuation of Yunho "taking care of Jaejoong"! *coughcough*

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vicshi April 11 2011, 06:52:51 UTC
haha i would but i'm not too confident in writing smut though. would u like to help? XD

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vicshi April 11 2011, 06:51:56 UTC
u know i was afraid the last line would be over-mushy, was planning to add a few more lines afterwards but in d end i just decided to leave it there =x

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vicshi April 11 2011, 13:33:23 UTC
thx for commenting ^^

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heenoona April 11 2011, 09:57:00 UTC
yunho is sooooooooo sweeeeettttt *ouch it's killed my teeth >_<" LOL

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vicshi April 11 2011, 13:33:49 UTC
he's the perfect boyfriend isn't he? i wanna have one like him lol

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chepii April 12 2011, 06:27:22 UTC
this is so sweet vicivici T____________________T "
me likes it a lot ♥
yunho talks like us lol ...but just that in this OH so deeply-in-love-and-concerned way that only a lover would ♥
We should start listing all the gifts ~~~
I feel JJ's pain and I wish his 'plan' would work out but baby is totally failing at the moment
=( !
hopefully he can have more 'real surprises' before parting to Taipei and the other countries !
write more more fics like this one ! so lovely ! ♥

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vicshi April 12 2011, 12:47:23 UTC
i tried to potray YH as the perfect boyfriend really, i want the same version for myself lol T_T
thank for ur support sweetie <3 always encouraging

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