The Story Of an Hour- Diary entry

[victoriabuedo]

 Dear Diary,
When the news of Brently's death had been announced, it had shattered me in many ways. I felt as if my heart had paused and pondered into the world of the unknown. It was difficult to disclose my feelings, and reveal my inner thoughts, because I knew that my feelings would cause an empowerment of shame and disgust. The disgust and

Comments

[squarebluefish]

That is a very cool picture. Where'd you find it? And whoa, dude - you put EFFORT into that! Nice.

[alekspavlovic]

hey vikki.
i really loved reading your diary entry. it really made me feel the emotions that the character felt.
fanatastic job.
aleks

[sallylim]

I agree with the two above! Your writing is brilliant! I really like how your descriptions allow the responders to empathise with the character's emotions.

[michaelgriffith]

Victoria- that is an excellent choice for your best entry. You really have found a way of getting inside the character and experiencing the situation from her point of view. And what a fabulously supportive picture! Well done
MG