Title: Little Wishes
chapter: 7
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: KiritoXAiji, KiritoXKohta, TadashiXRyutaro and many others
Bands: main: Pierrot, Plastic Tree. Minor: Janne da Arc, Dir en Grey, Gazette
Warning: Language, abuse, sex, blow jobs, insanity and dictators
Disclaimer: I do not own these people and nothing is real...
Synopsis: When a simple wish lands
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LOL, that one really will be the end of me. LOL
who should be there with Ryu..............no idea, but since toshiya and kaoru are mentioned, how about the rest of Diru?
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I do have a very special plan for Kyo, so Die's free...Though I think you're fics have totally tainted my view, before my fic Die image was just an asshole now he has to be an evil asshole. And I really hope Takeo wouldn't put poor innocent Ryu with evil Die.
I was a little worried about Tadashi's emotions in this chapter. I feel like he was low, then strong, then laughing, then sad. It seemed bounce all over..grr it kind of bugged me so I tired shoving some reason in there. I hope it didn't feel jumpy as you read.
Also I realized last night that Kai's going to be around more often than I though...and I know nothing about Kai (I admit I wrote Gazette at the start to try to get more people to read... I know nothing about them)
Please continue the fight with your Kisaki chapter. you can do it!
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Oh no, why you have to let Die show up as a baddie? but if you have to do that then at least make Die pay for his wrong doing in the end!>__<
i think the Tadashi/Ryu scenes are fine, the chapter in itself is a bit heartbreaking.
Kai.........the only thing i know about him is he can cook pretty nicely, i'd seen it on a clip, and he looks super happy when he's drumming in concerts.XDDD
ARGHHHH but my PC is throwing a fit and my head hurts! so no kisaki chapter tonight!T_____T
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I don't know I can only see Die doing horrid things to Ryu, and Ryu's suffered enough. Though I might have him do something, who knows.
yaa a heartbreaking chapter...Okay that's what I was going for. I was afraid it jumped a bit, so I'm glad it had the desired effect.
Yes that's he's happy and can cook is really all I know about Kai. I guess that'll work for now.
Aw well I have your other Die story to entertain myself until it's gets up.
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