Little Wishes 10

[victoriakada]

Title: Little Wishes
chapter: 10             
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: KiritoXAiji, TadashiXRyutaro, KiritoXKohta,  and many others
Bands: main: Pierrot, Plastic Tree. Minor: Janne da Arc(Ka-yu), Dir en Grey, Asagi(D)
Warning: Language, abuse, sex, blow jobs, insanity and dictators
Disclaimer: I do not own these people and nothing is real... 
Synopsis:

Comments

[vampire_kiki]

too bad, it's 2 am in my time zone and i need to sleep.......will give you detial feedback tomorrow...........after i'm off work!

[victoriakada]

yes go to sleep! I'll comment on your comment Monday evening.

[vampire_kiki]

great! thank you very much!

[coffee_nosesock]

Win~ I was all excited when I saw this on my f-list page! I swear Kirito gets such a power trip XD I'm horrid on writing reviews so I will tell you that I enjoyed it throughly! And I'm trying to get my ass in gear on mine so I can show you but I need something amusing for Ryutarou to say XD

[victoriakada]

Ryu shoudl say something like "A frog woke me up" which he actually did say once on twitter...

thank you!

[coffee_nosesock]

He would say something like that~ too cute---all I can think of is when he tweeted he was dancing while doing laundry~ he seems so carefree it must be wonderful!

[vampire_kiki]

This chapter is difficult to comment, but surely smut is always welcomed!^O^
Well I just have to wonder how many porn you had watched before you penned this.XD

There’s one thing, maybe you can put a little more detail on Shinji’s old life? e.g. the family members he’s been missing? This’s just a thought.

ARGHHHH!!! Kirito’s outburst in the latter chapter scared me out of my mind!!! Tadashi is lucky that he can make a run of it but not poor Kohta! Too bad Kohta really needs to go relaxing on some beach, or more importantly, has his own life back!!!!!>_

[victoriakada]

none none. I don't want any..I read a lot of random things and drink lots of tea while I write smut...

Ah I might add a bit more about Shinji old life, maybe a dream sequence or something.

Yaa I'm glad Kirito being totally insane worked. I was worried about that.

thanks!

[vampire_kiki]

huh..........i always ended up reading smuts before i can finish my own smut.

but you will have to figure out creative ways of Kirito's lashing out later, before the throwing things bit grows old.XD

PS: as to the hot spring idea you'd mentioned before, could you change it into something else. hot spring sounds totally like where old men would go.

[victoriakada]

ah that's usually what ends up happening with me.

Hot springs for old men, really? I can see your point, but Kirito seems to have gone to them a few times. I remember reading on his old blog about him going and setting up times for his bath.