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victoriakada

Little wishes 11

Sep 30, 2011 19:32

Title: Little Wishes
chapter: 11
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: KiritoXAiji, TadashiXRyutaro, KiritoXKohta, and many others
Bands: main: Pierrot, Plastic Tree. Minor: Ka-yu (Janne da Arc), Dir en Grey, Asagi(D)
Warning: Language, abuse, sex, blow jobs, insanity and dictators
Disclaimer: I do not own these people and nothing is real...
Synopsis: ( Read more... )

little wishes

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cherrylng October 1 2011, 02:20:49 UTC

Purple! Why did you betray Ryutaro?! You two were best friends!

Poor Ryu, seems like the only way to escape is just digging further into himself. :(

victoriakada October 1 2011, 15:00:44 UTC

I didn't know that Ryutaro's relationship with the color purple would get so much love! ha ha. Yeah he's kind of totally out of it now, but at least he doesn't think Tadashi's dead...

cherrylng October 1 2011, 15:12:34 UTC

He's out of it now, and if Tadashi IS dead, he could still deny it in his wonderland or snap out of it and see that wonderland's gone twisted and scary.

coffee_nosesock October 1 2011, 02:51:05 UTC

LOL!! I was just going to say Purple was a cheating bastard!!! I bet he'll make it up to ryutarou one way or the other XD I like the conversation Tadashi had with Kohta I thought that was interesting! I'm looking forward to the middle of Oct then!! <3 this chapter deary!

victoriakada October 1 2011, 15:04:39 UTC

I really had no idea how excited you guys would get with Ryutaro and his purple love. yes, someone that conversation turned out different, the tone is much different than it seemed in my first draft. Oh well, it's better this way.

As far as the story goes it's about half way done now I think. (I can see the light.) Once it's done I can see myself writing lots of happy TadashiXRyutaro one shots to make up for the suffering they have there.

coffee_nosesock October 2 2011, 01:34:52 UTC

I made a massive Jellyfish plush and named it purple because of your story---that is how sad I am XD or awesome I havne't decided yet lol!!!

victoriakada October 2 2011, 01:38:39 UTC

That's totally awesome! (and at the same times fills my ego cup) I would love to see a picture of Purple!

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vampire_kiki October 1 2011, 16:40:02 UTC

12:39 AM and i need to sleep, comment tomorrow!!!T_T

vampire_kiki October 2 2011, 05:40:23 UTC

wowowwwww!!! more Jun! and the cute remark on Purple-chan! hahaha!!!Nothing else makes me quite that happy!^_^

okay, i like the Kohta+Tadashi's scene but on the other hand i'd rather have Kohta admits that "Oh yes, my brother is a PMSing bitch sometime" though i know he just can't say that in the story!

ARGHHHH!!! Aiji....Shinji sounds like he's pretty messed up and brain-washed somehow into thinking Kirito's his lover and he has to obey him! Oh poor him! And the last setence of the chapter, that sounds like you're going to let them have a threesome or something!XD

victoriakada October 2 2011, 11:41:54 UTC

yes...it seems like I somehow forced everyone to be a little messed up in the head in this chapter...I didn't mean to it just turned out that way.

It makes it sound like they'll have a threesome! Does it? Did I just dig my own grave? It was thinking of just Kirito and Asagi, but now the idea of Kirito forcing Aiji to watch just sounds too tempting. Maybe he when Kirito is with Asagi he calls him Aiji...It would probably really torment Aiji and well you know.

though on the threesome note. I had actually planed, once this is over, to write a little Sugizo X kiyoharu X Asagi fic...but yeah that's not for awhile.

vampire_kiki October 2 2011, 14:22:47 UTC

okay, looks to me like there's hardly anyone left in that story who's still in his right mind, saves porbably Jun and Toshiya.XD

And Kai, where did he go? we have not heard from him for a while?

What? your plan is just eviler than I could imagine!
Even though KiritoxAsagi hardly adds up in my mind, but Asagi being totally whorish with an 'oh fuck me!' attitude is something shouldn't be missed! But still i think letting kirito call asagi as aiji is a bit too much! would you cross this out?

victoriakada October 2 2011, 15:10:40 UTC

I think Shinya only had two words in the whole story! I don't know much about Kai, or well all Gazette members, so yeah. And you know he's not a major plot driving character and isn't making out with anyone to include in the smut scenes.

I don't really listen to D. I only know Asagi in Syndrome and his only solo song. So I only see him in black vinyl, and that too me matches with dictator Kirito.

Anyway, yeah sure I haven't even thought too much about the next chapter just that it's Kiri and Asagi time. So I'm open to cut or add.

Ah ah okay just Kirito and Asagi. I never wrote a threesome, so I best put it off while I can.

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