Little Wishes 14

[victoriakada]

Title: Little Wishes
chapter: 14/20             
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: KiritoXAiji, TadashiXRyutaro, minor: KiritoXKohta, Kirito X Asagi
Bands: main: Pierrot, Plastic Tree. Minor: Ka-yu (Janne da Arc), Dir en Grey, Asagi(D)
Warning: Language, abuse, sex, blow jobs, insanity, dictators, blood, asphyxiation
Disclaimer: I do not own these people and

Comments

[coffee_nosesock]

I knew this was going to be a good chapter from the bit I read before!!! Sorry it took me so long to comment! Long drive was long~ then I got distracted and hyper by Takanori answering one of my questions in a interview XD I'm looking forward to him talking to Aiji I really like Kohta and he's fun to write!!!! I'll contuie finishing up what I have for you----what did you think of the last chunk I showed you? <3

[victoriakada]

yeah I understand driving for awhile and then not wanting to do anything...but I wanted at least one comment before I went off to bed so I wouldn't have nightmares about how everyone hatted my writing.

This chapter seemed to elevated Aiji. He seems more powerful even if he did get strangled and left in the tub. I really liked Asagi's line of 'Why did he finish you off' I'm just in love with that...not I'm fangirling over my own story....

Anyway, YES write more! I really liked how Kohta is in your story...and I get a hint that Kirito might to something with Ryu, kiss or maybe something a bit more them rub it in Tadashi's face..Go go write more!

[coffee_nosesock]

No worries, I wouldn't forget about you dearest~ the drive wasn't too bad till it got more dark since I have poor eye sight even with my glasses on so I feel like I'm really straining to see XD! Aiji seemed really epic in this chapter I think and Yeah Kiri will probably do more then kiss him though now that you say it kissing him in front of Tadashi would be funny O___O right now ryu is content with his rocking back and forth lol

[vampire_kiki]

i had read part of the chatper previous so i dun have many new things to say here.........but i'm glad that Aiji is finally coming back to his sense. good for him.XD

and all the scenes are well written.^_^

[victoriakada]

The more I worry about how a chapter is written the more I have you read before hand. So thank you for always giving me your views that way I can move on.

[vampire_kiki]

i'm happy to hear that! i can't wait for Kohta to show up!^^