chapter 18

[victoriakada]

  Title: Little Wishes
chapter: 18/19            
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: KiritoXAiji, TadashiXRyutaro, minor: KiritoXKohta, Kirito X Asagi
Bands: main: Pierrot, Plastic Tree. Minor: Ka-yu (Janne da Arc), Dir en Grey, Asagi(D)
Warning: Language, abuse, sex, blow jobs, insanity, dictators, blood, asphyxiation
Disclaimer: I do not own these people and

Comments

[coffee_nosesock]

Oooooh I adore what bits you added to my HIbiki handywork!!! This chapter is very emotional I feel Tada-Tada needs more then just some hugs XD I'm very glad he's back with Ryutaro again though! I WANT HIBIKI GIFTS!!!! I take them from Kyo :D

[victoriakada]

yes thank you so much for your help with that! I really like how you write Hibiki so it both our Hibiki's in one!

This chapter was really emotional. I felt that Tadashi kept on crying..but anyone would it that situation.

thank you for your support!

[cherrylng]

Who knew that Ryutaro's mental instability was actually an asset for some reason? Seems like when the troops came by, they may have ignored him thinking he's long dead, right? o_O

Now to see Tadashi, Ryutaro and Aiji escape from what Kirito turned into a hellhole. He really is crazy. So in conclusion, he got so crazy that the UN decided to bring NATO into destroying him? Or maybe that's just me remembering what happened to all crazy dictators.

[victoriakada]

yeah pretty much. So it's a good thing Ryutaro is completely mad.

hmmm that's an interesting ending...but Japan in this world is the most powerful country and everyone else is pretty much under their thumb. So Kirito rules the world almost!

Oh well One more to go! I'm excited!

[cherrylng]

But that means a loooooong time for Tadashi to bring him back out of his shell. Let's hope France's asylum offer is strong.

Even the strongest people would get toppled once the weak ones work together to bring them down. So I doubt that Kirito would last if he gets any crazier.

YAY! 8D

[victoriakada]

I might speed it up for the sake of the story. So talking Ryutaro in the next chapter!

[koipondering]

Ahhh so excited I squeeked when I saw it. Ooohh poor broken broken Ryutaro I adore him so much

[victoriakada]

I'm so happy you were excited to read it! I know I feel so bad for what I do to Ryu and Tadashi in this fic...I'll write some happy ones of them when I;m done.

[gongfufortwo]

I am working on a some what fluffy... well at least happy Ryu/tada fic. And your story inspired me to write. (gongfufortwo/koipondering my regular vs writing journal) also I randomly poke my roomate and go. "Tada... tada... tada" Because it makes her laugh and I made her read your oh so adorable descriptions of them.

[coffee_nosesock]

PURPLE!!!!! XD---I need a purple icon!

[vampire_kiki]

huhhh.....i really don't like off-scene deaths but whatever. Jun as a character deserves an on-scene death but it's....It's beside the point.

btw, Kohta still hardly has any break.XDDDD

I'm kind of laughing.XD

[victoriakada]

I see your point, but I don't think I had it in my describe Jun's death.

and yes poor Kohta, oh well at least he had some alone time with Kirito

[vampire_kiki]

*sighs* sometime we have to be cruel to our characters for the sake of storytelling. e.g. with the upcoming chapter of Shadows, I'm like "God! I seriously, really don't want to write this!" but I'm finding a way to force myself into writing those stuff.T___T

hahhaaaa, Kohta deserves his break.XD