Once again inspired...in the wrong way...

[victorkattz]

Yet another fic inspired by real life events...

This is a sequel to my Prowl/Jazz fic, "Notches"...

I present to you,

Comments

[hibohabu]

Ah… Fic be the universal elixir! This made me very happy and I hope it cheered you up, too.

It's wonderful to see Prowl and Jazz again, but I think I enjoy their mistakes more! Poor Prowl regretting his poor firewalling instead of his poor communication. At least he tried to explain. I guess keeping everything to himself for so long has overrun it with vines and cobwebs, and it'll take a lot of tugging before he can share it freely.

I think it's impressive Jazz is still holding himself together despite his shaken self-opinion. I wouldn't want to realise my partner found me to be undesirable just as we're getting to the good part, either, so kudos to him for not going ballistic over that. He knows how to stand up for himself, which is also a good thing.

But Jazz is a little too good at defending himself. He was quick to outtalk Prowl every single time and leave the room-his own-to avoid being slighted. I suppose he'd make an effective lawyer, but an effective lawyer is an inflexible person. He cannot switch sides freely and

[victorkattz]

No problem! Yeh, it DID make me feel better after I wrote it... An' I'm feelin' a little better with every hour that passes...only I'm sleepin' on th' couch at home now, so THAT'S not too comfy...

I'll take all the criticism ya can give me! Only way we're gonna get better at what we do, right? :)

[swift117]

i was glad to see your new post in my list and came here in an instant! took a while i finally dug out the first part, to enjoy it properly.

absolutely i can state now that you have a strange dark way of envisioning Jazz and Prowl, which makes your fics dark, angsty and uncomfortable to read - in a good way. Yeah, it is definitely your gift, to write new aspects of them/their relationship. I'm glad you do it.

pls do more, im curious.
and dont forget to do new chaps to your other works, too :P

[victorkattz]

Heh heh... Don't worry. I ain't forgotten them :P

Don't know why I feel that way 'bout 'em. I love t' read all sorts of fics about 'em....yet when I put pen to paper, this is what comes out. It's like the soundtrack of my life is set to Linkin Park.

[swift117]

*huggz*
yea... thats weird. I would go crazy having Linkin Park goin on for longer than 1 or 2 songs.
Self pity would kill me ;)

Also, when i write, it is all set to TRAGIC mood, even if i cant stand tragedy in RL at all... and im craving for happy ending.