Plenary (Tformers100; Aerialbots; Table: Peace; Prompt: #5- Wholeness)

Jul 18, 2011 14:28

Title: Plenary
Series: Transformers G1
Table(s): Peace
Prompt: #5 Wholeness
Rating: PG-ish?
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Aerialbots, Superion; brief Prowl; a couple more mentioned.
Word Count: 430
Summary: //Silverbolt.// Prowl's voice was calm and collected, only the slightest hint of strain acknowledging the fact his troops were currently being torn ( Read more... )

group: aerialbots, challenge: tformers100, character: silverbolt, series: transformers g1

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eerian_sadow July 18 2011, 21:59:08 UTC
oh, that was beautiful and brilliant! i love how you showed them all weaving together, rather than just talking about it happening. the merge seemed so much more real that way.

great work, hon!

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videetcredere July 18 2011, 22:44:45 UTC
I'll admit, having taken a bunch of psychology classes, I have a strange fascination with how gestalt bonds would really work, and this is the result of musing over Superion and the actual merging.

I'm glad you like it! <3

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tainry July 19 2011, 00:22:06 UTC
That was the most fascinating and wonderful link-up I've ever read. SO THEM!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
<3333333333333333333

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videetcredere July 19 2011, 00:25:54 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! <3

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playswithworms July 19 2011, 00:57:49 UTC
EEEEEEE!!! Hooray!!! More Aerialbot Awesomeness! ^_^

I really like how it starts, with Prowl summoning Superion with a single word - just a small cameo but so very him.

And then your descriptions of different facets that each brother brings to the unit as they combine are absolutely marvelous - Skydive's thoughtful hum of strategy, Fireflight's observations of all things big and small, Air Raid's boisterous energy to be met with Silverbolt's "yes, I did see!", and Slingshot, exactly: all fury and arrogance but still careful of hurting them with his recklessness <3333333333333333333333

Loved it! Would read it again! In fact I already have (and again, and again...)

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videetcredere July 19 2011, 01:15:10 UTC
I love Prowl as much as I love these crazies, so he'll probably show up pretty often~

I'm glad you liked them! Those all came surprisingly easy to me, it was the bit between Prowl's cameo and the actual descriptions that fought me. With these five, I adore the way that they compliment each other perfectly when they actually take five minutes to stop driving each other crazy. (Which isn't often, but still.)

Eeeeeee, yay~! <3 *claps with glee*

I am apparently on a roll because I might have another possibly-longer fic up before I sleep tonight.

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gunmaxual December 7 2011, 22:12:53 UTC
Aw, man, that's excellent. I love how you wove the ABots into themselves until Superion emerged.

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videetcredere December 8 2011, 06:17:28 UTC
Glad you like it! :) Thank you for the review! <3

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