Now's the Time, the Time is Now (cont.)

[vie_dangerouse]

 (cont.)

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[greeneyes_fan]

cut?

[vie_dangerouse]

Already on it. :)

[tarotgal]

Absolutely beautiful. Loved the quotes/memories, the reality of the situation creeping in from everywhere, even the middle of sentences. And the h/c and sick!Dean were glorious.

So many little moments I love, like Dean stuffing his pockets with napkins, Dean ducking under Sam's arm at the bathroom, Dean letting Sam feel his forehead, and that dance between them as they want to both worth through what's going to happen and deny it as well because it's all too terrible on top of this immediate bother that's at least something they can try to deal with. And that promise at the end, and Sam's response? Perfection.

I loved this. I'm totally reccing it when I get home.

[vie_dangerouse]

You are glorious! Thank you so much for your lovely compliments on this story, and especially for reccing it! <3333333

P.S. Are you the tarotgal... meaning the one from the SF archive site? ;)

[tarotgal]

Your fic was more than deserving and then some :-)

P.S. Are you the tarotgal... meaning the one from the SF archive site? ;)
One and only! Although some days I feel like I would get a lot more done if I were two people. Unless you mean to complain about how the archive hasn't been updated in a long time. In which case it's totally a different tarotgal altogether. The one with the evil goatee. That's her. Not me at all. *hides under desk*

[vie_dangerouse]

No no no, you are awesome! I have read through the majority of the fics on your site, and I adore them all. Especially the Harry Potter ones, mmm. <3

[borgmama1of5]

Getting teary...the end really had an emotional punch to it...Very well done stream-of-consciousness, felt very in character. And loved the use of episode quotes!

[vie_dangerouse]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the quote usage; it was fun to decide which quotes to use to best define each moment of the story. :)

[kalliel]

Thas' some rock-solid classic H/C, right there. <3 My favorite quoty bits:

“It’s not really that bad, Dean,” he says softly, and doesn’t miss the grimace when Dean whips his head around to look him directly in the eyes. An unwavering, unbroken line between them. Dean seems to consider saying something for a moment (His own voice, taut as steel cable, but someone must’ve mixed a cheap alloy, because the foundation was crumbling around him as he told Sam, It’s not even that bad, alright? Sammy. Sam. Listen to me, we’re gonna patch you up, okay?)

And:

“Yeah,” Dean swallows with a slight wince. “-It’s practice.” He looks up at Sam with a crooked half-smile.

“That’s not funny.” (Dean, his voice weak and cracking: Oh, come on, it’s a little funny.)

That first one especially just killed me. Great job, bb!

[vie_dangerouse]

I do love a lot of the language in this fic, I do. Thank you, bb! <3333333333

[ever_neutral]

FORGIVE THIS BELATED COMMENT. Only got around to finishing this now. This is terrific. The tone is very nice and bleak, and your Dean and Sam and Dean-Sam are all so very THEM and manage to give me warm fuzzies even in this wonderfully depressing mess of a situation.

[vie_dangerouse]

YOU ARE ETERNALLY FORGIVEN. (Channeling Jesus for the win)

Even with the whole hell thing, and the losing-Sam thing (seasons 4 & 6, respectively), and even the imminent apocalypse thing (season 5), I still think that Season 3 packs the biggest punch, angst-wise. There's something about a ticking clock and false promises of hope that just gets me. tl;dr could go on forever about Winchesters, sorry.

Thank you so much for the lovely comment, lovely! <3