Poetry... been awhile

[vielika]

Angel Bane
by Amber Timlin

Crouched and broken
She lay torn
Unable to bring herself
To force herself to stand

Rain, tears from heaven
Falling, falling on her
Weighing her down
With the sorrow from above

Angel bane
What causes an angel pain
What forces her to her knees
it's Angel bane

One wing black, one white
Torn between two worlds
Shunned by both
Home in none.

Comments

[vhalidictes]

I hate (bleep!) poetry. This is cool. Write more?

Also, what is "bain"? I feel like I missed something...

[vielika]

bain is something that brings about somethings downfall, or causes its death. Like a sword named Orc Bain would be considered a weapon with bonuses against orcs.

[vielika]

Doh >< Im dumb, spelled bane wrong. fixed it now though.