Title: Wet Spot
Author: vienna80er
Pairing: Orlibean
Rating: NC-17, slight BDSM
Disclaimer: Come on, get real!
Beta: spellchecker. Mistakes are clearly my own. Especially the “tenses”.
A/N: Could be read as a sequel to
Auction Night but it's not a must.
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He contemplates coming home )
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*composes self*
*giggles again*
I haven't read the first piece to this, but I scanned through the comments and gathered that it had top!Orli in it (not really a fan of that) so I'll imagine that this part that I just read is Orlando being tortured *g*
And I don't think I've friended you yet. May I?
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I'm always happy to expand my circle of friends so please, friend away.
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Anyway, getting back to this lovely little slice of perfection, I adored it! I am NOT a fan of BDSM, as I think I might have mentioned to you when I commented on the prequel, "Auction Night", but since that was practically the only BDSM fic I've ever actually enjoyed, and since I trust you and your wonderful writing, I also decided to take a chance on this. It was a very wise decision!
I could see everything so clearly in my head; Sean squirming about as he desperately tries to pay attention to the discussion he's supposed to be having, until the pleasure just builds up and overtakes him!
Mmmmm, what a hot, sexy picture that makes! And the poor baby was just so embarrassed, and worried about his Master's reaction. I really just wanted to give him a consoling hug at that point!
Thanks so much for sharing this story, and I'd love to know exactly how Master Orlando did react...if the muses are ( ... )
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I want to thank you for your wonderful feedback. I remember you mentioning not being into BDSM. You don't know how much it means to me that you gave me and the story a try. I'm also pleased to hear that the story didn't cross the line for you so you could read and enjoy it although it's not your usual taste.
*whispers* I can tell you that although Orlando will not be very happy it won't get really bad or dark.
Thank you also for putting me on your friends list. I'm looking forward to staying in touch with you and getting to know you better. And of course keeping up with your wonderful stories.
*hugs*
Barbara
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I hope Sean isn't in too much trouble. He really tried to be a good boy.
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Thank you for your nice fb, I'm glad you liked both stories now that you found them.
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