Remembrance - Day Four

[vierblith_tefu]

Title: Remembrance
Pairing: TezukaFuji
Rating: G for now
Genre: Romance/Drama
Warnings: Spoilers, and this is shounen ai
Disclaimer: I don't own Tezuka and Fuji. They own each other, though.
Parts: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

A/N: here you go! Hurrah! There's only one switch here. ^_^

Hint No. 4: What you’re reading right now… it’s just a subplot. The main

Comments

[schweinsty]

Oh, that's really interesting so far. I like how you kind of made it a triangle, but not really. Yuniko's a bit annoying, but she's not like most OCs, so that's cool. Hmm, is the POV Fuji's later on, when he's remembering the relationship? Or maybe Tezuka himself as he's reminiscing... either way, that's pretty cool. Can't wait to see more :D.

[vierblith_tefu]

Oh. I'm glad you liked it. I couldn't make a real TezuOCFuji triangle to save my life. Too biased, I think. ^_^

Yes, the PoV is Fuji's reminiscence. *nods*
I'm really happy that you found it cool!
Thanks~

[schweinsty]

Yays! I got it right :D!

[vierblith_tefu]

*shakes your hand*
Congratulations, then! ^_^
A lot of people have complained about how confusing it sometimes gets.

[dhorz]

Heh. Cute. (I only got to read this now!!!)

I'm excited to know what will happen next!

[vierblith_tefu]

Thank you! Glad you liked it!^_^

[aoi_aka]

Sorry. I just had to pick my jaw up off the floor. My guess is that 'I' is Fuji. The narrating sounds very detached (that's not why I'm guessing it's him) as if Fuji is recounting things from the past and how they started. I am fearing something along the lines of character death (it won't stop me from reading) in the future.

Thank you for sharing and I can't wait for the next chapters.

[vierblith_tefu]

XD
Yeps. Fuji is the 'I'. Uhuh. Yep. Detached... yes, Fuji is indeed recounting. Death? Hmm...

Again, thank you for reading. There's already a chapter after this.^_^

I just have to say this: Hunny~~~~~

[aoi_aka]

The 'I' had a taste of Fuji that seemed cold and heartbroken. I was reading between the lines and the tone of voice. It was the way he referred to Tezuka that told me in the pit of my stomach that there was something there. I won't tell you what I think that something else. Wait. I'll forget when the time comes so I'll tell you now. The voice feels like it's in pain and is going every single detail of their relationship, not in regret, but so as to not forget everything. I think I'm gonna go in a corner now and cry.

I hope I didn't put ideas in your head...

Hunny is too adorable!

[vierblith_tefu]

The 'I' had a taste of Fuji that seemed cold and heartbroken.

T_________T
Hmm... don't worry. Fuji's not quite cold. But he might be heartbroken.