DRABBLES; 15-minute challenges
15-minute drabbles ; various pairings
roselit @ viewscape
angst, gen ; varying wordcounts
A/N: These are short pieces I wrote for several of the challenges on kpfw 9.0, in which writers were given 15 minutes to produce something based on a given prompt (pictures, poems/words, songs). All of these are stand-alone writings, unrelated to one another.
( let's paint the picture of the perfect place; )
roselit @ viewscape
angst, gen ; varying wordcounts
A/N: These are short pieces I wrote for several of the challenges on kpfw 9.0, in which writers were given 15 minutes to produce something based on a given prompt (pictures, poems/words, songs). All of these are stand-alone writings, unrelated to one another.
( let's paint the picture of the perfect place; )
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i really liked the jaesuchun one. gah, it's the broken that's good. that probably doesn't make much sense rofl, but i feel the most for yoochun. he knows that jaejoong only wants junsu and yet the fact that he's so willing gets my heart all :'(
and then we have this, And Changmin does, sharp edges and brute force that he is, and Jaejoong pretends that this is just another sad love song he plays on loop in his head.
>:l please don't tell me you can't do speed writing D:
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heartbreak can be so subtle in ways like that, i think. :(( sometimes, there's just that temptation to be accepted, so much that it pushes you to do things you know you shouldn't. ;( of the five of them, yoochun seems the type who would, and it's that much more tragic. ;;
a;dlkf cries, i really can't, omg. ;A; you have no idea how much i struggled, libby, it was not easy and i was afraid i'd keep being too late a;sdkjf :|||
♥♥ thank you!
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the hosu was my fave, though...followed closely by the first 2~!
/clings to you and hopes to suck in your talent by osmosis
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really? ahh~ then i must write more hosu. :D!
lolol /clings back ♥ everyone has their own awesome talent!
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YES~!!!! It helps that I have a sudden mad obsession with Yunho~!
you're sweet~!
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I always get blown away with your pieces (specially with the short ones).
I agree with one of the commenters, even when you wrote all of this as a stand alone it has some kind of similar flow. Im find myself liking your Junsu more and more. Is rare to find a writer who goes deeper when they are writing Junsu and you seem to do a fantastic job at it.
You prose style is changing a lot and I like it, it flows well and is really easy to read.
And if I have to choose a fav... would be the last jaemin. I love how you describe Changmin as sharp edges and brut force and absolutly love the connection you did between music and Jaejoong. Makes me ache a bit cuz is so them!
And comment is getting too long. Wow... when was the last time I gave you such a long comment? :D Anyways lovely little drabbles!
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i love junsu so much lately (not surprising :'D), so i enjoy writing him a lot. i'm happy you like my characterization of him, though! and the jaemin one is one of my favorites, too, depressing as it is. ♥;
hee, thank you so much for the comment and for being so wonderful! :DDD <333
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♥ I've missed you writing /crying ♥
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aklsag what are you talking about, fool. -shakes- look at these. you were fantastic. >:(
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+mems
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flailing, you are too sweet urgh a;ldskjf thank you! ;; i've missed writing, too, and i'm still trying to get my groove back. :( my ficmuse is kind of fickle and uncooperative most of the time, though. dies, i cannot take flattery, jsyk. ;A; i never think i deserve it. ;;
so ecstatic about the memming, though! thank you so much! ♥♥ :DDD
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