[Fanfiction] - Title: GET LOST (With Me) - [Part 2/5]

[villa_visualkei]

100 Themes Challenge
Title: GET LOST (With Me) - [Part 2/5]
Pairing: OnKey, broken!MinKey, side/background!2Min
Rating: R-ish (Language and some Adult Themes)
Prompt: 50. Breaking the Rules
Genre: AU (College), Romance, Drama, Angst-ish
Words: Total of 36,882 words; this part 8,055 words.
Disclaimer: I do not own SHINee (oh the shame), unfortunately all I

Comments

[theia88]

yay updated! ugh am i the first who comment

[villa_visualkei]

Hehe! :3. Yeah you are the first, well done! Thank you~.
Looool~ I like that too, I think it's because that was the way I started to like Jinki too, like Key caught my eye first in SHINee because of his striking features and flashy clothes but then Jinki just slowly drew me in, hehe (=>.<=).
Haha, I like the thought of Jinki driving too~ kekekeke. Simple things can be so much more attractive sometimes.

Hmmmm, was Minho jealous... who knows? (Kekekeke, maybe me?).
Minho has his good and bad points, but I think it is obvious he didn't treat Kibum well enough in the years that they were together. Aha, I like when people are curious about my stories, haha. I'm not sure if why they broke up is as exciting as people may be expecting though -worries- haha.

Of course, OnKey is more important, loool. I EVEN FAN-GIRLED OVER KIBUM KISSING JINKI'S CHEEK, how sad, haha. Is Kibum losing his bitchy-ness... or is he really a bitch at all? Haha. I have no idea, I think Jinki just highlights a different side of Kibum, :3.
I would like a boyfriend

[sunday_lee]

I've just read the two chapters (in my office) and finally back home to comment

[villa_visualkei]

Ah, thank you for taking the time to comment when you got back home, that's really sweet, :3.

Haha, yeah I am not really sure what is going on inside Kibum's head either. Haha. He is a mystery, he's a complex character. I was sort of trying to show that their might be other reasons for his outward behavior and that maybe he isn't actually as fierce as people expect him to be.
Yeah, I don't think he's that happy with his life either.

I like that your curious but now I feel like maybe their relationship is a bit of a disappointment, haha. Like it wont be as exciting. I know, Minho was mean for doing that especially after two years and he still didn't introduce Kibum. That's one of the reasons as to why he's a bad boyfriend. Haha.
I know Jinki is like amazing, -sobbing- I want a Jinki.Haha, I like Jinki's inner thoughts too~ :3. Squee, he's adorable (and attractive at the same time

[villa_visualkei]

Hello~ :3.
Yey! Thank you, I enjoyed the shopping trip scene too. I love Diva-ish Key, hehe. I really liked writing that scene.

Haha. I like Kibum's Mom, she's feisty just like her Son.
Jinki is one confused and conflicted guy, haha :3 why do I do this to him? Looool.
OnKey Kisses = <3.

Kibum can't resist Jinki's dorky charms.
-Goes grazy with you- (⌒▽⌒) hehe.

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.

[hitoshisakurai]

OMG SO MANY FEELINGS ARGHHHHHHH

"Jinki tries to ignore the way she looks a little disgusted when she mentions Minho’s name, almost as if the thought of her Son mixing with Kibum was hard to believe and that kind of pissed Jinki off a little and for some reason he was overcome with what felt almost like empathy for the younger boy at the knowledge that Kibum had dated Minho for all that time and had never been introduced to the boy’s Mother or Father and Jinki knew that had to hurt the other but Kibum kept that relaxed look on his face." HOLY SHIT YOU JUST WROTE MORE OR LESS ABOUT SOMETHING THAT MADE ME CRY HARD TWO DAYS AGO. OH SHIT. LET'S JUST... LET'S JUST SAY I CAN RELATE TO KIBUM QUITE WELL, OKAY? OKAY

[villa_visualkei]

OH NO!! OMG!! That's horrible, I'm sorry that you can relate to Kibum's feelings here then... dammit! -Hugs- :3.

Haha, I know, he is all cute and innocent when sleeping... kekekeke ;3.
Yeah, that's exactly what I was trying to portray, that actually he's just kind of a sad person that doesn't really know what to do with himself and has trust issues. I'm so glad that you saw that, XD~.
Haha, I know, I always love OnKey's interactions because there always so awkward, haha and playful (=-_^=).

Nobody can resist Key, ne, hehe (=^____^=).

Haha! Yey! Exactly, I always think that, just because I like dark colours and don't wear pink people think I'm all emo all the time. Haha. Go JINKI!!

LOOOOL! Your reaction is perfect, I love the tension between OnKeyHo, looool :3.

Doki~doki. I felt the same way when I was writing that which is actually kind of sad, but I just WAAAAH... OnKey here is so perfect.

LOOOOL. OnTae is a relatively new liking for me, but I couldn't help but use Taemin as fuel for Kibum's jealousy. I sense pretty boy tension

[chibonkey]

its sounds kibum hide something from jinki...when he cut his mother's words to tell who jinki is...
and everytime kibum''s face blushing...its seems kibum lile jinki attt the first place

[villa_visualkei]

I think Jinki is quite well known in the Kim house... well with Kibum's fan-girling Mother anyway, hehe.

Oh, I agree... Kibum just can't resist Jinki's gentle charms, kekekeke :3.

Thank for reading and taking the time to comment.