[Fanfiction] - Title: GET LOST (With Me) - [Part 3/5]

[villa_visualkei]

100 Themes Challenge
Title: GET LOST (With Me) - [Part 3/5]
Pairing: OnKey, broken!MinKey, side/background!2Min
Rating: R-ish (Language and some Adult Themes)
Prompt: 50. Breaking the Rules
Genre: AU (College), Romance, Drama, Angst-ish
Words: Total of 36,882 words; this part 6,761 words.
Disclaimer: I do not own SHINee (oh the shame), unfortunately all I

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[villa_visualkei]

(=^_____^=).
I shall wait for your return, hehe :3.
I KNOW! THEY NEED TO REALISE THEIR FEELINGS!!!!

Hehe, Kibum's Mom is awesome.
Hope you enjoy!~ XD.

[villa_visualkei]

HAHA!!!! I added that part in rather last minute. Hope you liked it though. I really like Kibum's Umma, haha :3.

Haha, chemistry... and some tension, kekekeke~ (=^.^=).

Thank you. I love your comments, :3.
Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.

[theia88]

Kibum's mother is such a cockblock lol.. oh don't worry mrs... kibum won't be pregnant tho. how can a boy get pregnant? lmao. but oh i love how the relationship despite the fake dating status, is slowly growing into real attraction between them . hahah. i still wonder what does minho think about jinki and kibum being together. oh does kibum know that he's attracting jinki? bcs if he knew it already, won't he feel sorry for taemin? lol
i think the conflict of the story hasn't appeared in this story. the conflict of jinki's heart, maybe but i'm more anticipated to 2min's reaction. the missunderstanding later about taemin as jinki's boyfriend in kibum's mind and to know more of kibum's pov but ugh, i wish i could read more and this chapter didn't stop there.
wait, if you said this story will be split into 4 parts, does it mean the next chapter will be the last one? can't wait to read more. *waiting patiently and stalking on your journal everyday*

[villa_visualkei]

HAHAHAHA! OMG! Yesh, here she is a little bit ne, but I still love her, :3. Haha.
Yeah they are struggling to resist one another... I am still a little freaked out that I haven't explained enough properly. Haha. 2MIN'S reaction might not be as dramatic as you would like...? haha. Kibum's still got some of his selfishness left regarding Taemin, so no he probably wont feel all that bad, he's just jealous of what he thinks is between Jinki and Taemin XD~.

It's going to be five parts now... I kept adding things in after reading people's comments, haha. So in all you kind of helped me as I went along posting each parts. Looool.

I really hope you enjoy the next part and the last part. I also hope you like the outcome and are not disappointed... -worries- (=^.^;=).

Thank you for reading and always taking the time to comment.

[sunday_lee]

sorry for this late comment ^^
Jinki's inner thought still amused me a lot, he's yearning for Kibum, even has dirty thought about Kibum, but he still tried to deny it, but he himself knew that he's attracted to Kibum lol I dun even know what I'm talking about.
Oh and nothing's wrong if Kibum is his cousin's ex-boyfriend, they broke up already Jinki ah~ he should turn this fake relationship into real one haha
I like Kibum's mother ^^ her imagination is running wild, no wonder her son- Kibum has his weird logic guessing Minho's new boyfriend and even came up with a conclusion that Taemin is Jinki's boyfriend.
I'll wait for next chapter ^^

[villa_visualkei]

No need to apologize, your commenting is appreciated regardless. Hehe :3.

Haha, I always like writing Jinki's inner-streams because I can imagine his head as being a quirky place to be, hehe. HAHA!! That's what Kibum does to boys and girls around the World, kekekeke :3.

Yeah, their silly ne, (oh wait, I am the one who wrote this so... I guess I am silly, haha).

I like Kibum's Mother too, I would have liked to write more of her. I actually added that part in kinda last minute, but I liked how it turned out in the end. Haha! Exactly their ways of thinking are warped.

I hope you enjoy the next part.
Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.

[hitoshisakurai]

Oh my gosh. Okay, so, thanks to all those descriptions I feel like I'm falling in love with them just as they fall in love with each other. You know what I mean ><

Their back-hug... I'm such a sucker for back-hugs... but all that touching, fingers drawing circles on the other's hands, GIRL, I'M ALL MUSHY INSIDE and I also remember feeling such thing once so... gosh, it just melted my heart ;~~~~; such a beautiful, soothing moment ;~~~~;

JO KWON. GOSH I LOVE HIM.

And omg ICWUDT!!!! Kwon and Key and Sweet Dreams, ahahahaha xDD

And, ngl, frustrated Jinki sounds really enticing to me, I'll have you know~~ gosh, this story got me so hooked, and as I told you, I don't even like OnKey and I don't usually read things that would break JongKey but I CAN'T STOP THIS STORY IS JUST SO GOOD AND I NEED MORE WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME ARGH

I love it so much. Oh my.

And Key's mum is kind of amazing.

Key's hips are too.

What am I even saying.

off to the next chapter!!>O

[villa_visualkei]

OMG! I DO KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN, haha. I'm glad your liking the descriptions, I think I tend to over-describe sometimes, I have a rambling nature, (=^~^=).

I KNOW, BACK-HUGS FTW!!!! I always love back-hugs, there's always more room for back-hugs. Waaah, I'm such a big sloppy romantic. Keke~ :3. Thank you, I always want to try and project the moments across with an atmospheric feel, so it makes me happy that you said that.

JO KWON IS EPIC, nuff' said XDD~.

[chibonkey]

oh myy god...soooo kibum was born by 'just talking'???
what the???...kibum's mother say such thing like that in front of her son's friend...

[villa_visualkei]

HAHA!! I actually really like Kibum's Mother... even if she is a little strange and unorthodox...? (=^_____^=).
Hehe. It is kinda scandalous that she said that in front of Jinki, haha.

Thanks for reading and commenting.