[Fanfiction] - Title: Those Three Little Words: They Don’t Come Easy [Part 3/4]

[villa_visualkei]

100 Themes Challenge
Title: Those Three Little Words: They Don’t Come Easy [Part 3/4]
Pairing: OnHo/TofuHo, brief and past JooNew (Joon/Jinki), brief and past JongYu and brief mentions of other pairings including some crossovers.
Rating: PG-15/R (warning for some explicit language and mature themes)
Prompt: 2. Love
Genre: AU, Romance, Drama, Angst-ish,

Comments

[thpeekaboo]

SPOT >_

[thpeekaboo]

I read the three chapters at one shot and omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg precious I LOVE THIS series to bit @$!$!@%!@$!~$!@%$@!#$#~ ;___;.

Jinki's insecurity that was caused by his screwed up relationship with joon - ;___; omgo mg omgomg and i totally loved the jongyu scene here it's so pretty omg - it's so platonic and everything is so pretty like - even the scene where joon apologises. :/ even if it's not clear if he had feelings or not (probably no ;_; or yes?) he had let down of his high-school childish pride and apologized which is like - he knew he was wrong gah idk XD the quarrel between minew was ;_; in a lot of ways too ;_;~~

And holy Minho is such the perfect and caring boyfriend here i can't even #!$!@%#!@$!$%. the last scene was so pretty, about how Minho is all understanding and now it's Jinki who wants to show his love ;__; The way how they decided to ///coughs, it's just so beautiful in a lot of ways - especially how you wrote it ;_;
It wasn’t like

[villa_visualkei]

WOW! You read it all in one go? Ha, that's great.
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. It's kinda special to me now, just because it took so long to do, :3.

Yeah, it was a pretty cruel thing for Joon to do ne. -Tuts-. Kekekeke~ sneaky JongYu. I tried to show that Joon had changed a little bit, like he had grown up from his High School days where popularity and reputation were more important to him. I sort of wanted to keep it unsaid about whether he has feelings for Jinki or not, but lets just say that he has a lot of regrets over what he did.
Arguing OnHo upsets me... says the idiot who wrote it. (=^o^=).

I know, Minho is like the perfect Boyfriend. Haahahaha. Jinki is so precious to him. Ah thank you, I was really nervous about you know -cough- those sorts of scenes because I really struggle to write them convincingly. I get easily embarrassed. LOOOOL.

It's fine to repeat, even though your not because this comment is wonderful!

THANK YOU for reading and taking the time to comment, I am really grateful for your kind words, :3

[villa_visualkei]

(O.O)... BAHAHAHAHHA!
I know right, it's a total dodge from writing a full "love scene." (=^O^=). CoughsuchawkwardwordingCough

Ah, thank you. I tried to make it like you said, like a soft warm atmosphere. So it makes me happy to hear you say that. XD~.

Nah don't say that! I love your comments. They also make me smile like a weirdo widely. XP.

[ontaejongminkey]

JongKey is too gorgeous T^T idek asgsdjhfgsdkhjf They are so understanding and caring towards Jinki~

And Minho....he's his own gentleman/sweet/handsome/close to perfect self ;~;

Jinki's finally coming out and trusting people with his whole heart! Good! ♥

Another excellent chapter!^^ Thank you for updating~

[villa_visualkei]

I, myself, even love Kibum and Jinki's relationship as best friends here. I really wanted to portray how much everyone around Jinki loves him. XD~.

Of course, I cannot resist writing gentleman/perfect Boyfriend Minho, :3.

Yeah, he really just needs to give into what everyone and himself included knows he wants (Minho). Kekekeke~.

THANK YOU for reading and taking the time to comment. ♥.

[icutkey]

goooooooDDDDD...that was so god..i like the ending part in this chapter..

it was like...really...so tense in secnd chappie..i was like ok minho was jelous after seing onew with Joon n he get angry..n onew still confused bout his feelin..but now..the hell..just say it those three little word and tada....he say it now....that was so hearbreakin moment...i was like YAYAAYyy......

[villa_visualkei]

Thank you! :3.

I know, the second chapter was slightly worrying. Poor Minho and Jinki have been put through a lot... bad Author is bad. (=^~^=).

It took him awhile, but how can he refuse Minho's love...?

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.

[volatileflame]

this . . . ! this . . . ! i can't even come up with something coherent T^T
this is just so beautiful! *sobs*

[villa_visualkei]

Wow! Thank you, what a compliment to receive! :3.

-Hands tissue- XD~.

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.