[Fanfiction] - Title: Every Little Piece of You (When Light Fades into Darkness) [Part 1/2]

[villa_visualkei]

100 Themes Challenge
Title: Every Little Piece of You (When Light Fades into Darkness) [Part 1/2] 
Pairing: OnHo/TofuHo, JongKey (one-sided), brief! MinKey (Wah? O.O… am I really…), 2Min (one-sided),
Rating: PG-15/R (warnings for explicit language, mentions of adult themes and dark themes; including mentions of suicide and death)
Prompt: 3. Light

Comments

[ontaejongminkey]

Spot~♥

[ontaejongminkey]

Oh Gawd. I'm such a sucker for angst. I so, so, so, so, sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo love this ;A; I'm sniffling rn actually. I caught a terrible case of the colds and this story is just heartbreakingly sad (but oh so good)--not a very good combination tbh.

Jinki...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO T^T

sajgdfksadg I will patiently wait for the next chapter!
love you~♥

[villa_visualkei]

Hahahaha! I know. I practically cried while writing this myself... (not good with angst! AND IT'S JINKI! I am a bad writer).

Oh noooo! I hope you get better soon! No it's a very bitter-sweet combination, looool XD~.

I know. I am still hating on myself for the whole Jinki thing... -sobs- (T_T).

I am sorting it out now so hopefully it will be up later on Today or Tomorrow.

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment! -Hugs for you- :3. ♥.

[oconje]

Oh my heart! First, the last story (Those Three Words...) made my heart plunge to my stomach and then felt over full from all the romantic imagery, especially the bedrrom scene in part 3. Now you've broken it! You kill me with your writing. You are awesome! And I'm optimistic (although Jinki is dead) that Minho will reunite with Jinki?!?

[villa_visualkei]

OMG! I know I am so sorry, ha. I usually steer away from angst... because this is what happens.
I am glad that you liked "Those Three Little Words..." though. XD~. Just keep that OnHo happiness in your heart, :3.

Thank you so much, your words are so much appreciated. Gosh, really thank you for your wonderful compliments, -blushes-.

Errrrmm... well I guess we'll just have to wait until Part Two to find out. I have already got it done, hopefully post it Today or Tomorrow. -Panics- (=^~^=).

[villa_visualkei]

I KNOW, I KNOW!
-Judging myself- WAE DID I DO THIS!? -Sobs with you and hands you some tissues-.

I'm sorry, really - see this is why I try to stay clear of angst.

I don't know know either, it took forever to get this written as well, but thank you once again for your lovely words. I know I feel bad for Minho too... I still can't believe... I mean JINKI!!!! It's just I thought a mournful Minho would be a) more interesting to write and b) more painful because of how PERFECT Jinki is. OMG! I can't... I even cried while writing this, -sighs- bad writer is bad, (TT_TT). I didn't realise how misleading this could be. But hey! Peaks and Troughs are good right?... right? -Goes and hides away-, heh.

I can't believe I made you cry, -hugs-. It's probably only going to get worse, still got Part Two to post yet... -shivers- (>.<).

I know, I think I will probably stay way from the angst for a while. Try and stitch myself back together again.

Thank you for reading and commenting, I love your comments... <3.

[keziayansen]

OMO...OMO....OMO...
I just read this story today....
And I just cried so hard TT^TT
It's just kjsadfdfbhefsidvoejsgb....... *speechless*
It's so heartbreaking *still crying*
I also read the second part *sorry for commenting only in this part, bcuz I do't know what I have to say in the 2nd part*

It's so sad bcus Minho really can't live without Jinki.....
Geez =="
It's really a "sad" amazing OnHo story
Thank u so much :')

[villa_visualkei]

WOW!
Thank you so much!!!!
Please forgive me for my awfully late reply (I was on Holiday). Your comment is so wonderful. I can't even. Thank you so much really. It's absolutely amazing when I get comments like yours because they fill me with confidence and let me know that there are people out there who are enjoying my writing.

Please do not apologize for only commenting on this part, like seriously the fact that you have commented at all makes me deliriously happy. Haha.

Sorry that this story is so sad though (and that it made you cry). It wasn't really meant to be as tragic as this but it just kinda spiraled that way.

Thank you for reading (and reading XD) and thank you so much for your amazing comment, :3.