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nbaeker in villainy_100

Broken

Nov 27, 2007 15:16

Prompt: Broken
Fandom: Harry Potter
Villain: Lucius Malfoy
Word Count: 100

He wasn't the same any more. His wife was mewling piteously in the corner of their room, a most demeaning effect of her current... condition. He had no time for her foolishness. He was due at the Dark Lord's side.

"Get up, woman. You are a Malfoy."

She sniffled as she ( Read more... )

Comments 6

siriuslysmitten November 27 2007, 23:44:27 UTC

Yay! I love evil!Lucius, he's the best. Really awesome job on this :D

nbaeker November 28 2007, 00:05:24 UTC

Hee! yay! I've actually another one I'm putting up as soon as i finish this reply. Glad you like it!

lunglock November 28 2007, 01:14:45 UTC

So awesome :D I love it when Lucius is a bastard!

nbaeker November 28 2007, 03:17:58 UTC

Thank you!

philstar22 November 28 2007, 21:11:06 UTC

Evil!Lucius is awesome. I'll take him any way I can get him, but this feels really in character. I think that you've really got him down pat. All your drabbles really feel like they are about the character. I can imagine him doing and thinking these things.

nbaeker November 28 2007, 23:20:07 UTC

*feels all warm and snuggly* Thank you for your high praise!