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vindicated4u

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Dec 23, 2004 22:00

This is a new poem i wrote...tell me what u think of it...

THE PAIN IN MY HEART
THE KNIFE DIGS ALL THE DEEPER
HOW DID THIS START?
MY LIFE DESTROYED BY HER

STUPID THINGS I HAVE DONE
ALL THAT I HAVE SAID
IT'S ALL OVER, SHE WON
MY FRIENDS HAVE ALL FLED

AGAIN I THINK OF WHEN ( Read more... )

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hmmm saharx3 December 24 2004, 03:16:52 UTC

allan that was a great poem...keep up the good work...and dont worry itll all work out i no it will...:-/~sahar~

aww xbrokenonex December 24 2004, 03:21:21 UTC

lovely. nice work budd:)

silentone789 December 24 2004, 03:31:59 UTC

I think your music is starting to sink in. Just joking. Great poem.

u_r_myonly1x December 25 2004, 02:06:14 UTC

eep

umm... anonymous February 2 2005, 13:58:59 UTC

hey! Just wanted to say i love you too, but these poems are confusing me! what did i do?!?!
well, i love you no matter what and i absolutely love hangin out with!
i love you!
~Jill~

Re: umm... vindicated4u February 2 2005, 21:23:12 UTC

hmm...this poem...i just felt like writing it...idk...it had nothing to do with anything really...i love you...