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Dec 23, 2004 23:20

and yet another...this one is about jamie...i wrote it last year...

HEAVENLY

SHE TALKS TO ME
AND I WONDER WHY
SHE CAN'T BE
AN ANGEL IN THE SKY

SHE'S BEAUTIFUL
I KNOW IT'S TRUE
WHEN IT WAS DULL
IT WAS HER I DREW

YOU WOULD KNOW
IF YOU SAW HER
SAY IT'S A GO
CUZ SHE'S STELLAR

ok...i think thats all the poems for tonight...

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tangledupinme23 December 24 2004, 04:51:03 UTC
wow allan. those poems are beautiful! i really really REALLY like them! i totally wish i could write poetry like you do! lol. GREAT job! i <3 them. :)
Love Always,
Brittany

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yay xbrokenonex December 24 2004, 04:54:07 UTC
i love that poem bout me...its beautiful:)
you make me happy allan.
<3

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angrywhiteboy89 December 24 2004, 16:53:17 UTC
thats one shnazzzzzzzy peom

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angrywhiteboy89 January 2 2005, 21:56:52 UTC
whoa lol i said peom!!! haha

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