fic: the anatomy of a sentimental man.

[vinniebolzano]

the anatomy of a sentimental man
harry potter. severus snape (snape/lilly, snape/bella, james/lilly) r. warning- dark! fic. He is not one for sentiment. He doesn’t crave the world’s approval. In many ways he is damaged goods, but no one really knows it.

Comments

[marketchippie]

Oh, wow, this is quite lovely--I love the way you've written Lily, and the romance is nicely delicate. I like.

[vinniebolzano]

thank you so much
it was really organic the whole process, once i had snape it all came out like this, it is funny how one chapter in a 7 book series can move one so much more than all of the books combined

[ryuuvictoire]

Gorgeous. Snippets, moments, all so incredibly meaningful. Yeah, Snape. You feel -nothing- but hate and rage. Yeah. Right.

I had shivers when I read the word mudblood right after that scene where she kisses him.

[vinniebolzano]

Thank You! i find that when i am lost i can read that one chapter in the book and everything makes sense again because ofcorse Snape and Lilly were soulmates, it couldnt be any other way

if you had shivers reading that part imagine what i felt when i wrote it, those are heartbreaking

[teafortheninja]

Writing is hard. It's especially hard to say what you want to say without using too many words. You've done it here, you captured everything perfectly and simply and it was lovely and not lacking at all.
I like the concept of Severus and Bellatrix. I love all of the imagery. I love the emotions that you captured, young love becoming almost unbridled wanting and yeah. Wow.
Really lovely.

[ogwriter]

Damn, this was straight up awesome. Exactly the right type of Snape fic. He truly is a tragic character.