Comments | vintersaga: Fic: Leader's order

vintersaga

Fic: Leader's order - Epilogue

May 09, 2010 20:45

Title: Leader's order - Epilogue
Characters: Kangin, Yesung, Leeteuk, Hangeng, Sungmin
Pairing: KangMin, HanChul, YeWook
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: ~1030
Genre: Vampire AU, drama
Disclaimers: I don't own anything,
Summary: When your leader gives you an order you can only obey, but still in Kangin's opinion his love life is something which Leeteuk shouldn' t ( Read more... )

suju, fic

Comments 14

vintersaga May 9 2010, 18:45:58 UTC

Spot lametortoise

lametortoise May 9 2010, 19:33:57 UTC

awh... the epilogue was the cutest!!! ehehehehe... *snigger snigger* i'm kinda speechless again... lol... kangin sending eeteuk a memo 15 yrs ago??? lol... what on earth happened to it??? ahahha... i wonder what hangeng and yesung did with it... hehe... the transformation and all was amazing... so tender and moving... =) love u!!! u're amazing!!!

THANKS SO MUCH FOR ALL THESE!!!

ps: i'll probably be back again after i reread these... *sheepish grin*

vintersaga May 10 2010, 17:44:35 UTC

XD Yup, Kangin did! XDDD Well, someon (name shall not be revealed) asked Donghae to use Leeteuk's comp and lo and behold something happened with the poor computer and in the end Leeteuk lost a couple of things among them the memo Kangin had sent him. XDDD

I'm so happy you liked your birthday fic! XD

You're Welcome. <3

followurdestiny May 9 2010, 20:11:56 UTC

Lovely story & ending!
Lol Teuk's and Kangin's bickering and everyone being annoyed with it, but also being the 'cause of it...
Yesung and Geng did something with the memo? lolz... Geng's stuffed head on the wall XD...
Scary Wookie XD hihi...KangMin wanting an own apartment - their exercising! xD and they may have to hire a private carpenter for their house XD
lolzzz
<333

vintersaga May 10 2010, 17:48:01 UTC

*glomps* I'm so happy you liked it until the very end! XD

*giggles* Yeah, I guess people who can't die naturally have to amuse themselves somehow... LOL Someone *whistles* told Donghae to play around with Leeteuk's comp..... XD

Oh yes!! I don't really see Ryeowook as a meek person. XD Maybe not scary, but I don't think he's a timid guy. XD

*snickers* They should buy a 'handyman' company!

tana2507 May 9 2010, 20:45:12 UTC

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHH DEAR GOD.

THIS FIC. IT HAD ME ALL ADDICTED FOR ABOUT THREE OR FOUR WHOLE DAYS. I swear... I only didn't comment because I usually only comment on each chapter of a longer fic if I know the author and know how she'd react to my spamming... BUT ALSO BECAUSE I WAS TOO EXCITED.

Honestly. I don't know what caught me in this, but but but I even tweeted about how impatient I was for the last chapter... XD Okay so coherent comment.

I think I absolutely liked your characterisation, especially of Kangin and Yesung. I also liked how you didn't spend too much on explaining everything, just worked with the usual supernatural fic features and still it didn't get cliché, because you focused on the plot rather than the universe. It was funny at the right places, intense and exciting at the right places... and I pretty much think I could read another, like, 20 chapters of this story, if you ever decided to work further with this AU.
Thank you so much for writing it!!^^

vintersaga May 10 2010, 17:55:28 UTC

XD Your comment made my day. I got so happy when I read it. ^_^ <3

I'm so, so happy you enjoyed it!!! XDDD

*nods* This was my, I think, 10th attempt writing a fic with the prompts I got. In a lot of them I got caught up in 'how to make this AU work and how to explain it to the reader'. In the end I bored myself silly and decided not to explain anything at all. *laughs* In one of the fics I wrote about two pages just trying to explain the AU, when I realised it I hit the delete botton and started over. XDDD

20 chapters!!!! *runs away screaming in horror!!* j/k! <33 But seriously, that's the best compliment I could get. Thank you. <33333

mochandesu May 10 2010, 00:48:03 UTC

It's almost sad that's over~!
Loved the whole thing&heats;♥♥

vintersaga May 10 2010, 17:56:09 UTC

*hugs* I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it! <3

pinkdaisuki May 10 2010, 03:06:10 UTC

HAHAHA!! THE EPILOGUE WAS EPIC!!!! <3
I love how they trick Leeteuk just like that~ hwhwhw Hangeng and Yesung is really..wakakakaka XD ROTFL!!

It's nice..=) Everyone seems happy!! ^^ That's why I always love Happy Ending~ X3

vintersaga May 10 2010, 17:59:34 UTC

XDDD So happy you liked it! (I tried not to make it too sappy. lol)

*giggles* Yeah they are! I guess they have to come up with things to amuse themselves with over the years. XDDD

*nods* happy endings are really nice. <33333