Voynich

Apr 21, 2014 17:32

For a room containing a dead body, it's remarkably tidy, was Moreen's first impression on entering the scene. Aside from the small crowd of white-gloved technicians combing the small study, and the body of Joshua Huber lying face-down in the center of the floor, nothing seemed out of the ordinary. With a practiced eye, Moreen scanned the room.

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ritual, locked room, murder, investigation, ljidol, closed room, crime

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n3m3sis43 April 23 2014, 21:00:00 UTC
I liked your take on the topic! I figured it was going to be the priest--it's always the priest. Too bad he wasn't smart enough to clean up after himself?

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violaconspiracy April 23 2014, 21:22:18 UTC
He did clean up very well, in fact. I imagine it takes some talent to not leave behind any DNA or other tell-tale signs. If it hadn't been for that stupid floor tile...

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fodschwazzle April 24 2014, 00:31:36 UTC
I like how everyone is assuming that the killer was Father Douglass when clearly the murder weapon was found with the button. The button was the clear culprit here.

This is really good stuff though, for one who seldom ever reads or visits the world of mystery.

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violaconspiracy April 24 2014, 01:16:37 UTC
Apart from the literary, you have to admit I've had a lot of inspiration lately.

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solstice_singer April 24 2014, 01:11:53 UTC
So, I'm guessing it was the priest. Not such a good priest after all.

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violaconspiracy April 24 2014, 01:16:13 UTC
It does appear that way, doesn't it?

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whipchick April 24 2014, 12:41:18 UTC
This would make a great starting point for expansion into a longer piece!

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violaconspiracy April 24 2014, 17:58:18 UTC
I kind of feel that way, too. I don't know if I'm ready to embark on a longer work of fiction, but I think this might be a good one to start with.

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itsjustc April 24 2014, 14:17:04 UTC
I really enjoyed this.

I had no idea it was going to be the priest until the button was found but then I'm always really, really rubbish at knowing who the murderer is. I have to have it pointed out to me lol!

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violaconspiracy April 24 2014, 17:59:47 UTC
I did try not to make it really obvious, so I'm glad at least someone didn't pick it up right away!

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