This one took me so long and in the meantime I got bored with it:p

[violentsoul]

Comments

[polly_sings]

as always i like your paint detail, and i like what you've done with the images and your printed words, i think the problem is in the size of the canvas and the usage of space. if that makes sense.

but it IS pretty.

[violentsoul]

thanks for your comment Jill
yes maybe you're right...I was so excited when I bought this canvas but yes sure I didn t use the space the best way I dont know...

the perfectionnist in me feels rather gloomy today...let's go painting again some rainbows maybe to make this gloomy sky more luminous;)

blessed be***

[polly_sings]

i'm gloomy over my stuff too. isn't this supposed to be FUN?

[violentsoul]

ahah yes sometimes it's pretty fun:)
I think there are times that we are so deeply involved in what we do that if it doesn t match our imagination there is some pain not to be as good as we would love to...

But nevermind, the most important is to go on...we cannot always do something that amazing, we always have to learn and improve:)

we should bear in mind that yes art ,collages,painting should be playing:) just letting our imagination fly :)

smiles***

[painstained]

i feel so honored! i can't stop looking at it...butterfly wings *sigh* ***drifting off to your wonderland***

[violentsoul]

;)

[easternsun]

I think it's beautiful :-) Have you thought of adding something in the middle as a way to connect the two sides of the canvas?

[violentsoul]

I could add something in the middle but I would feel there are too many things on this canvas...
no really they seem to need to be cut in the middle and make two canvas of this one;)
but nevermind...I accept to fail sometimes it doesn t matter for I really enjoyed making it in the beginning:)

blessings

[easternsun]

And even if it didn't come out how you wanted, since you enjoyed it, I'm sure there are some techniques you discovered while doing the collage that you could apply to other ones that you will do :-)

[xtm666]

I actually like this shape and size. and it does seem visually balanced to me.. i like this a lot :)

[violentsoul]

thank you very much:)

[sunbat]

I like the fact you write words on the borders of your collages =)

[violentsoul]

thanks:)
I have always wanted to do so:)but I felt awkward with my horrible handwriting and thought it would ruin the collages but I just needed to do it as I have things to say and I am a writer/poet first though this one is not that amazing poetry ahah:)

[sunbat]

you don't have an horrible handwriting at all !