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[violet_mirage]

Hey this is the beginning of one of my stories. I've begun to write more since I have been slacking. I hope it is well liked and if you have any comments please tell me, even the bad ones. I will take all comments as constructive criticism to better my writing and will not hold anything against anyone. (Unless you are an ass about it. Anyway here

Comments

[hellstruequeen]

Beautiful, darling. Really. I'm exacting on people my age but that was great. You might want to work on dialogue a bit, but that was the only thing I noticed. The whole thing with death and flowers... Damn, girl.

[violet_mirage]

Really? That makes me feel happy ^_^ ~happy guk~ ^_^

[mikemurphy]

As I've said before, it's damn good. You didn't believe me, maybe having it on here is gonna help you with that.

[violet_mirage]

yay

[anikitty]

just like linden said. it is beautiful darlin'. very sad though