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violettefemme

Collaborative Fic Update!

Jan 02, 2006 19:33

Title: A Study in Still Life, ch. 3
Authors: violettefemme & often_adamantaPairing: OB/OMC, eventually Orlijah ( Read more... )

Comments 14

montmorency January 6 2006, 01:41:36 UTC

Oooh, this is very sweet and lovely. Quite a twist with Orli being the introverted, uncertain one. I'm newish to Orlijah but have become an addict. Looking forward to your next chapter!

dancemagic January 8 2006, 21:05:18 UTC

I somehow managed to miss this story up till now so I had to go back to read the other chapters. Great story and I'm looking forward to more.

cat_luvs_guysx2 January 10 2006, 22:54:52 UTC

I am so sorry it took me so long to get here. *hangs head in shame*

I thought this was a delightful chapter though. I really enjoyed watching the relationship between Elijah and Orli build up slowly, then blossom and unfold. Orli laughing and having fun again... his lonliness and sadness is almost tangible. A part of me just wanted to shake him to make him see how good life could be with the right person. I liked how in the beginning before the session with Elijah, Orli fell asleep to Cillian's scent, but after dinner with ELijah Orli is now falling asleep to ELijah's laughter.

And ELijah is so good at bringing Orli out of his protective shell. His easy going manners and attitude are just what Orli needs to loosen up- thanks to evil Cillian. *kicks him to the curb for Orli's sake*

Keep up the good work girls.

fizzyflick January 19 2006, 15:20:31 UTC

I'm loving this story and can't wait to see how it plays out - Cillian is the perfect villain! I've recently discovered your writing and I was wondering if you'd mind if I friended you? Promise I'm nice and within the vague bounds of normality as seen on teh internets! Thankies :)

violettefemme January 19 2006, 15:23:27 UTC

Friend away! I'm happy to have you.

Thanks for commenting and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story and anything else you decide to read of mine :-)

lisabellex March 29 2006, 19:35:15 UTC

When I saw that chapter 4 was up this morning, I realised I'd missed chapter 3 when it was posted back in January, so it was great to catch up.

This is really enjoyable. Love the chemistry you two have got brewing between Orlando and Elijah; it's really tangible. Looking forward to reading the next chapter now.

:)