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violettefemme

Collaborative Fic!!!

Jul 31, 2005 21:58

Title: A Study in Still Life, ch. 1
Authors: often_adamanta & violettefemme
Type: LOTR RPS AU
Pairing: OB/OMC, eventually Orlijah
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Rough, Meanie person sex with slight Dom/sub undertones.
A/N: This is a WIP…

( Chapter 1 )

Comments 31

erisedraine August 1 2005, 03:55:51 UTC

I really like the evil undertones to this story. :)

Only one minor criticism though, you switch from past tense to present tense a couple times. Like "doesn't" instead of "didn't", just little things like that. :)

I await Elijah's entrance into the story!

often_adamanta August 2 2005, 21:19:34 UTC

Thanks for pointing that out. Grammatical help is always welcome. :)

And thank you for the comment! I'm glad you liked. I'm looking forward to Elijah, too.

stormatdusk August 1 2005, 05:06:09 UTC

< He had an insane urge to mention the lasagna again but squashed it, deciding he couldn't be trusted to speak right now >

There's a lot of darkness and feeling in this piece; I'm in.

often_adamanta August 2 2005, 21:20:51 UTC

I'm in.

Awesome. And thank you.

And that's one of my favorite lines, as well. :)

layne67 August 1 2005, 05:07:30 UTC

Love this. Reminds me a bit of your 'Adore' universe but this time with Orli on the receiving end. Poor Orli esp this Orli, shaking, stayed curled on the floor as long as he dared. Cillian hadn't touched him, but it was okay. He didn't need to come. He wasn’t hard anymore. It was okay.

I hope Elijah would make an appearance soon. Orli deserves someone better than Cillian.

violettefemme August 2 2005, 04:28:30 UTC

I'm glad you are enjoying it!

This does have elements of the Adore universe here, with the 'domestic unrest', if you will, but as the story plays out you are going to find that this relationship is much different!

Thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoy whats to come!

anonymous August 1 2005, 06:09:06 UTC

This was so nicely written-not overdone-just enough. I wondered if this may have a tie in with the Often_adamanta's Silence universe?

Cillian is an ass...but I loved this read!

Thank you!

often_adamanta August 1 2005, 19:50:33 UTC

No, this doesn't have anything to do with Silence. Orlando works with ceramics in both universes, but as you'll see when Elijah shows up, all the characters are completely different.

thank you for the comments. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

bluelillie August 1 2005, 16:23:40 UTC

Hey there violettefemme!

Lovely start of your new fic! I was just yesterday thinking that you didnt post anything new recently and I was pleasantly surprised when I saw one today! hehe.

I like the vulnerable and obedient Orli! and it seems that Cillian like him like that too! This really fantastic and I cant wait for more, so post more soon!

Lillie

violettefemme August 2 2005, 04:20:53 UTC

Hey there lils.

Sorry it's been awhile since I posted anything, but I work 50-60 hours a week and so most days its all i can do to shower and brush my teeth when i get home :-) BUT...

I'm glad you like the newest story. often_adamanta and I are having a lot of fun with it! I think we will probably bang out another chapter soon... So stay tuned.