The Red Queen Affair: Chapter 2

[viper_duo]

Disclaimer: I do not own KKM or its characters.

The Red Queen Affair

Disclaimer: I don't own KKM or their characters. 
Pairings: Yuuram
Ratings: PG 13

Chapter 2

What goodness in her heart she lacked

She will find in the coming daze

No longer will she be in mourning

Surrendering reason carelessly to the haze…

“…Wolfram.” Yuuri uttered in a strange mix of

Comments

[anonymous]

Wow.. an AU. btw, just wondering, are the 3 brothers related to eachother here?

So far it seems interesting. Just a little short.

[viper_duo]

uh huh! that's true I don't know whether they are brothers or not :/ ....
probably will explore more of that next chap i guess.

feeling embarrassed about that sorry

[nekokatechan]

>o< I didn't get first comment *too slow* Even so, have I told you how much I love you recently? Because I do. I love this fic so much. The idea is so great and the characterisation is wonderful. I kind of second the other person about the length issues, but at the same time, I can see in the AN that you had writer's block. I find that I usually force out a small chapter when I have writer's block, then return back to writing normal length chapters again.

I think my favourite bit this time was Yuuri's thoughts. They added just that little hint of Yuuri's humour into it, as well as making the scene just come alive in my mind.

Great second chapter *waits impatiently for the next chapter*

[viper_duo]

Wow I'm glad you liked the chapter! And really I was hit by inspiration and 1 o'clock in the morning worked through the night to finish it so I'm glad its actually comprehensible. Unfortunately the longest chapter I've ever written is about 2.2k plus words, so this length is the average number of words i can sustain before going back to doing other stuff XP i get distracted i know! *sobz*

the funny thought bubble things was not planned, in fact none of the humour was (its like agnst fics don't like me), but i'm so glad you liked it.

hope you will continue to enjoy this fic :)

[sora_morikawa]

ohh,waited so long for this! =D
*__* i'm so happy to read it, since the beggining of your story everything sounded really misterious and I love it!
hope to read more soon
=D those tow love each other, as always.

[viper_duo]

I'm glad you're glad really! A lot of the stuff in the fic has a hidden meaning that will be revealed later :) ! so stay tuned....and watch this space.

[pearljamz]

OMGGGGG You have finally updated!!! XDDD!! been waiting for months~ lol

And all I can say it's worth the wait!!

Review

[anonymous]

Hihi^^

I think your story is really nice. I love it. I read this chapter and I feel really interested. It really intrigues me. I've actually read your first chapter from Fanfiction.net. and Im glad I've spoted your second chapter here.hehehehe^^ was really anxious to read the next chapter. Wolfram seems so innocent and bratty as usual. Shibuya Yuuri seem more mature and as always justice, resonable and damn adorable^^ I wonder if the red queen is Julia or Cherie (sexy queen) hehehehe^^ Keep up the good work ne?!