The Sound of Footsteps on the Soft Falls

[viper_duo]

The Sound of Footsteps on the Soft Falls

Ratings: PG-13. 
Characters: Yuuko, Clow, Watanuki and Doumeki
Disclaimer: I don't own xxxholic or any of their characters. 
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Heian Kyo, pre-modern Japan, Year 805

The sound of bare feet slapping against the wooden floor mixed in with the

Comments

[iambickilometer]

Interesting concept... very interesting. I wonder if you'll expand on it. It would certainly be interesting.

You have a point about people changing over time, most assuredly, and while Yuuko did not at all seem like the Yuuko she is now, she easily could have grown to become such in woman in the time she granted wishes.

[viper_duo]

Nod... thank you so much for your comment. I kinda thought Yuuko's evilly, I know but I won't tell you kinda personality takes time to acquire and cultivate :D !! and that kind of prolific drinking feels like its hiding something else :p

[iambickilometer]

You're welcome. :) She's definitely hiding something else.

[jenny_1260]

That was a lovely read, thanks :)

[viper_duo]

thank you for your kind appreciation! Have a happy holiday!

[autumnflight]

Interesting. I always wondered if Watanuki was Clow Reed's child, if not reincarnation. Yuuko being his mother is a good idea to be considered too.

[viper_duo]

Clow Reed has a lot of kiddies from all his dimensional reincarnations, one more won't hurt :P !
thank you for your comment :D have a merry christmas and a happy new year!

[grass_angel]

As iambic said, very interesting.
Although what I found the most interesting was the clever tie-in with Clow Reed. Which, as I think about it, is a very nice explanation why she is resentful towards him.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on how Yuuko came to be. Although I don't necessarily agree with the exact circumstances of this story, I do agree that Yuuko underwent a change, possibly as a result of Clow Reed or even accepting the role of the Wishgranter.

[viper_duo]

thank you very much for your comment! its okay if u dont agree with the circumstance, its just a possibility :D !!

[flakedice]

An interesting proposition. It covers some elements nicely - Yuuko's preference for elaborate traditional clothing, her relationship with Clow, her connection with the shop and her regard for Watanuki. I also liked the inclusion of Doumeki. I'm curious to see where you'll take this ;)

[viper_duo]

aye...thou smelteth a sequel? maybe an epilogue should be in order. thank you for your comment am i big fan of yours :D !!!