The Red Queen Affair: Chapter 4

[viper_duo]

Disclaimer: I do not own Kyou Kara Maou or its characters.

The Red Queen Affair

Disclaimer: I don't own KKM or their characters. 
Pairings: Yuuram
Ratings: NC-16 for stuff I don't wanna discuss :P

Comments

[theinvisibleink]

Yuuri's passion for justice has finally come out! Does that mean there's a possibility of him turning into Maou!mode? Whoa, what was that ending just now?! You can't leave us hanging long after THAT! :P Looking forward to reading more! :D

[youko_hiei88]

oh wow, an update!! I think I've either been chasing this from aarin or ff.net last time. XD and blue eyes? Shinou? Why what how when? ah, the suspense! XD

[smexy_cakes]

Yay!! Another chapter!! Well update soon! I like where this is going

[colettebis]

Ahh! I'm glad of this update, recently I've found a lot of good fanfics that had been dropped by their authors (or seems so) and I'm happy that this one isn't one of them.
It has been a very good surprise discover that New Shin Makoku isn't only a matching name and they are really mazokus with powers, I'm expecting to see more about it. And of course about the ghost. Is he really going after Wolfram? Or who he really wants is Yuuri and Wolfram is the competence to take apart?
Finally a little of review: What's going on with Gwendall? He and Yuuri meet in the first chapter, but after, in the second one, they act as if they didn't know each other. And now he's Wolfram's brother. Then... Conrad also? Murata hasn't said anything about it (well, seeing Yuuri's reaction towards Wolfram, maybe he had hide it in propose). Can you explain it in any way? I'm a little confused.
Thanks for your work. I'm waiting for more.

[viper_duo]

Thank you for voicing your concern. I can't give a lot away because most of this will come out eventually in the plot

[colettebis]

Perfect, thank you!!

[artgodess]

OoOoOoOo this is getting good. so wolf is being targeted by a ghost that looks like him...sounds familiar, like shinou perhaps hmmm lol i dunno
one thing though you wrote "82 year old brat " so is the time difference thing still relevant in this story, like wolf looks 17 but is really 82??? it's a little confusing
anyway good story

[viper_duo]

This is actually really Shin Makoku. They are actual Mazoku, citizens living in Shin Makoku. They age accordingly.