Title: i'll be here (by your side) Fandom: vixx Pairing: rabin Rating: g Word count: 1,800 Summary: when hongbin feels like he is about to fall, he knows wonshik will be there to catch him.
ok first a few things I would like to point out that are completely irrelevant to the quality of your writing - how dare you not inform me you posted - ooo I got a mention in your a/n! - LOL NEVER I WILL NEVER JUMP ON THIS SHIP
your writing is so pretty! this is the quality i wanted from you when we did our collab, but NO. "TO BE HONEST" APPEARED INSTEAD. I'M STILL JUDGING YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR THAT. Your imagery!! Cohesiveness!!! Structure!! Improved a loooooooot I'm so happy so so happy
but what is this "For the first time in forever..." .. FROZEN REFERENCE??????? NOT SO PROUD ANYMORE
anyway the only reason I'm reading Rabin is because you wrote it. Sorry to say but you didn't move me enough to actually change my mind about the pairing. xoxo.
Note for the future; you have a habit of misusing commas and having weird sentence structure. Stahp. Read your writing and PUNCTUATE ACCORDING TO HOW YOU SPEAK IT IS THE FASTEST, EASIEST AND PAIN-FREE WAY I ASSURE YOU
i keep on forgetting to reply to you oops bUT I AM NOW.
o gosh i was actually so worried about your critique for this (and you found this sooner than expected. girl you speedy). but i am glad that it was okay???????????????????? sobs, beautiful words from the writing senpai <3
thanks for reading this???????????? and sorry????????????????? ; AAAAAAAAA ; and ilu for taking time to comment, unlike me and my pointless ones lmao.
yeah, commas are something that i am probably going have to pay close attention in future fics u______u teach me your ways pls.
again chii, thanks for commenting and look forward to other things!!!!!! c; (sooner than later most likely) ilu <3
lmfao you should be happy, i was just so ecstatic that you had posted that i just channeled my sass and left the majority of my criticism in the recesses of my mind. You're welcome! HOHOHO I'm very speedy online don't you know??
wait what I ain't no writing senpai qurrrrrl squints SQUINTSSS your comments are so useless to me istg i'm never coming to you for writing stuff ever again lmao
aaaaaaaaa ye you gotta let me edit for you!! i like sassy editing!!! why you no send stuff to me?????????????/
this was really nice! your descriptions are lovely (so many sensory details ahhhhh) and i really love bean and won$ik and ahhhhh this was wonderful ^^ it satisfied my rabean craving ˆ¬ˆ
omg thank you so much! rabin is one of my top vixx's ships and they were so close during pre-debut, so this happened orz. i am glad it satisfied you <33 thanks for commenting.
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- how dare you not inform me you posted
- ooo I got a mention in your a/n!
- LOL NEVER I WILL NEVER JUMP ON THIS SHIP
your writing is so pretty! this is the quality i wanted from you when we did our collab, but NO. "TO BE HONEST" APPEARED INSTEAD. I'M STILL JUDGING YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR THAT. Your imagery!! Cohesiveness!!! Structure!! Improved a loooooooot I'm so happy so so happy
but what is this
"For the first time in forever..."
.. FROZEN REFERENCE??????? NOT SO PROUD ANYMORE
anyway the only reason I'm reading Rabin is because you wrote it. Sorry to say but you didn't move me enough to actually change my mind about the pairing. xoxo.
Note for the future; you have a habit of misusing commas and having weird sentence structure. Stahp. Read your writing and PUNCTUATE ACCORDING TO HOW YOU SPEAK IT IS THE FASTEST, EASIEST AND PAIN-FREE WAY I ASSURE YOU
ok
chii, over and out
xoxo
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o gosh i was actually so worried about your critique for this (and you found this sooner than expected. girl you speedy). but i am glad that it was okay???????????????????? sobs, beautiful words from the writing senpai <3
thanks for reading this???????????? and sorry????????????????? ; AAAAAAAAA ; and ilu for taking time to comment, unlike me and my pointless ones lmao.
yeah, commas are something that i am probably going have to pay close attention in future fics u______u teach me your ways pls.
again chii, thanks for commenting and look forward to other things!!!!!! c; (sooner than later most likely) ilu <3
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lmfao you should be happy, i was just so ecstatic that you had posted that i just channeled my sass and left the majority of my criticism in the recesses of my mind. You're welcome! HOHOHO I'm very speedy online don't you know??
wait what I ain't no writing senpai qurrrrrl
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SQUINTSSS
your comments are so useless to me istg i'm never coming to you for writing stuff ever again lmao
aaaaaaaaa ye you gotta let me edit for you!! i like sassy editing!!! why you no send stuff to me?????????????/
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