fic-DBSK-Hand in Hand-Chapter 3

[virdant]

Title: Hand in Hand: Chapter 3
Author: virdant
Length: 1,203 words; multi-part (3/~9)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Tragedy, Angst, AU, Sci-fi
Pairing: JaeChun, (Changmin/?)
Summary: “Get off here,” Yoochun says

Comments

[coolplastic19]

I am thoroughly confused....what the crap happened to Yoochun? Is he even real? And the...with the....oh never mind, i'll just have to read to next chapter to find out anything won't i... -_-

[virdant]

Thank you for reading ^^

Um. Yeah. Um. I want to explain, I really do, but to explain would give away like, half the plot. So uh. Yeah. Please keep reading! ^^

[coolplastic19]

don't worry about it, i already figured out exactly what's going on....................I'm just kidding i'm still more confused than Junsu was with that polaroid camera, but I will most definately keep reading! <3

[virdant]

Haha, it is a little confusing since I like unreliable narrators. They're fun.

I'm glad. ^^

[jt_fangirlism]

so chunnie is jaejoong's ___________ or he's in it/jae's mind???
OMG, next!

oh, and i love the soulmate iloveyou-exchange.. yes, that's the kind of jaechun shipper!fail i am,i rejoice in simple things like that!XDD

[virdant]

Thank you for reading ^^

things will be explained eventually. ^^;;

Soulmates is love. That's completely not fail. XD. The story is labeled as JaeChun because I think relationships are more the way characters interact and the unsaid things that matter. Not the way out there stuff.

[blurmeese]

I'm not going to even try and say anything about the plot because I'll just end up looking stupid and unobservant :OOO BUT I LIKE IT WHEE

Implants. Jae's ear. Chun's voice. All linked? Now I'm starting to question whether Chun is actually just a hallucination or something *shot by author* fnsajkn I LOVE YOUR WRITING. The feel of the city, lifeless, metallic, just comes out so well with your words and guhh I need to get to chapter 4 :O

[virdant]

Thank you for reading ^^

^^ I'm glad then, that the plot switching integrated fairly seamlessly. I'm glad you like it though!

^^ I had fun making Yoochun ambiguous, and actually I spent a long time paring down the different ideas into the one I actually used. So ambiguity is both my fault, but also my intention, if that even makes any sense. Thank you, I'm glad you like my writing ^^