fic-DBSK-Hand in Hand-Chapter 8
Title: Hand in Hand: Chapter 8
Author: virdant
Length: 1,692 words; multi-part (8/9)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Tragedy, Angst, AU, Sci-fi
Pairing: JaeChun, YunChun, HoSu (HoMin, YooSu)
Summary: “Hero,” Changmin repeats, as if Jaejoong hadn’t said anything. “I’m actually… seeing you ( Read more... )
Author: virdant
Length: 1,692 words; multi-part (8/9)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Tragedy, Angst, AU, Sci-fi
Pairing: JaeChun, YunChun, HoSu (HoMin, YooSu)
Summary: “Hero,” Changmin repeats, as if Jaejoong hadn’t said anything. “I’m actually… seeing you ( Read more... )
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dude, i seriously don't get it.
i'm trying really hard and i still don't get it. *_____________________* explain? D:
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It's a series of misunderstandings. And Changmin sucks. A lot. And uh. I'm setting up for the ending. Which is getting written. Really. I'm totally not studying for those midterms.
And Jaejoong's not real. But he is. And it's complicated and I can't explain it in normal voice. D: I. I dunno. It's hard to explain.
And uh. Yoochun was once real. Only not really, and Junsu knew Yoochun as Micky, just like Yunho did.
And I hate Yunho as a narrator because he always changes the story on me, but that's good, because now things make sense and the ending is more cohesive, but he went and added plot points that I didn't want.
And Yunho thinks he knows everything when he doesn't because he's a lousy narrator.
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Bwah. Well. Everybody is telling their own story, and they're all liars, and the only narrator I actually like in this fic is Changmin, who actually cooperates with me (and Jaejoong, sometimes), which is why things are probably so confusing. And all of them only know bits and pieces.
tbh, there weren't supposed to be so many character relations in the mental outline. I'm panicking.
I actually just... wrote the paragraph explaining implants. It's complicated and it's actually two different goals in one object... implants and the people in the implants are seperate (and now I'll shut up before I give away like, half of the point of chapter 9 ( ... )
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Lol, confusion is probably to be expected, because I wrote this chapter with chapter 9 in mind, so things aren't nearly as clear as they should be... but after I look over chapter 9 and make it post-worthy chapter 9 will be up very soon. And then things should make perfect sense. And if things still don't make sense, then I need to revise my writing.
Yay, Yoochun! And Changmin! They've been missing for a while. ^^
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here. ^^ Chapter 8 & 9 are too interconnected to post too far apart from each other (and I skipped studying for writing).
Poor Yoochun; he's identity is so ambiguous. XD
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I love your writing style♥
A little confusing, but I think I get it, lol.
Can't wait for the next chapter :D
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I'm glad you like it! And I'm glad that you think you get it too. :) It seems to be excessively confusing, but perhaps (if you've just read the past chapters recently), things are a bit more clear for you? Thank you anyways :)
^^ Thank you; the next chapter will be up soon, and I hope you like the conclusion. :)
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*saves 8 and 9 to read*
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and the miniscule yunchun, i'm totally rejoicing for it!^^
♥♥♥♥♥ to show my appreciation!xP
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Well, I'm glad you like it, and I'm glad it makes sense to you! I actually didn't like this chapter that much (it's probably not my favorite), mostly because it added a plot point when it's the second to last chapter, and that's sloppy writing, but it helps to make the entire plot flow more smoothly, so I didn't cut it out (but I wish I had included the plot point or at least hints of that point in previous chapters). I'm glad you like it though.
^^;; Yoochun has very little appearances in this fic, sadly enough.
Thank you! ^^ ♥
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