fic-DBSK-Hand in Hand-Chapter 9

[virdant]

Title: Hand in Hand: Chapter 9
Author: virdant
Length: 2,222 words; multi-part (9/9) End.
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Tragedy, Angst, AU, Sci-fi
Pairing: JaeChun, HoMin, MinSu, implied HyukSu
Summary: But now, he works, four rooms away from Kim Jaejoong, carefully dissecting implants, trying to find the reason for this epidemic

Comments

[virdant]

Thank you for reading ^^

I like AU a lot, which is probably bad because I should write more canon-based stuff or just go completely back to original fic, but I'm glad you liked the concept! ^^

The JaeChun gets me all the time, actually--writing it was odd, because there's so little physical interaction. It's all dialogue and everything has to be conveyed in words instead of actions, which was :| and a trial actually.

Thank you. ^^ I'm glad you like this; I'm fond of poking at canon and mutating canon-events to fit into AU--it'd be a bad habit, but I don't think that trying to incorporate canon is really bad, so eh, yeah.

I'm glad you like it though. ^^ Thank you very much for reading and commenting.

[virdant]

Well, that's perfectly understandable. I'm fond of dystopic and sci-fi settings (fantasy is a close second) Oh, I understand; but then considering that they're presenting an image, it's the same as a character. Oh, I'm very fond of trying to apply canon to AU. I do it as much as possible, to make my AU at least canon-based, since I'm not writing canon-fic--otherwise it's just original-fic.

JaeChun makes me happy. rofl. I think that if I did ship, it'd be JaeChun. (and I totally gank ideas from Asimov all the time... I'm assuming we're thinking about the same Caves of Steel). Though to be honest, Yoochun was a real person was a decision made around the middle--he was supposed to be a perfect AI, and then I realized it wouldn't work properly, so I switched it. Jaejoong's understandably angry, but well, at least he can now talk to Yoochun face-to-face. Changmin's... actually lucky because he was supposed to have more burdens to bear, but I cut away one of them with a minor subtle point that I don't think anybody picked up on. Oh well. '

[blurmeese]

That was amazing. As in blow you away oh my gad LJ has talent kind of amazing. Oh gad, the way you tied up everything so loosely in the end, with the sheer...emptiness and Changmin (!!! ILU CHANGMIN GUH) making those mistakes. Gad, woman you are going into my to-stalk authors list.

I swear, Imma sit down with this beauty of a fic one day when I'm not on the verge of keeling over and coughing my lungs to savor the plot. :O

[virdant]

Thank you for reading ^^

Thank you for saying so! ^^ I'm glad you like it. And I'm so happy that you commented on every chapter--it just. It's wonderful. Thank you so much. I'm just happy that you like this fic. ^^ 's the story of life, though, isn't it? Mistakes change everything, and people are stubborn--all of them are, to be honest.

I already stalk you, so it's all good. ^^;;

I hope you get better soon. ^^

[virdant]

Thank you for reading

[virdant]

Mm, I liked their relationships in this setting

[morninglory17]

Yeah, I almost started crying when Yoochun and Jaejoong met...that was great.

This fic confused the hell out of me (thats good; now there's no more hell in me XDD) but its still cool. Maybe if I were a genius like changmin I would understand all the plot twists and stuff, but I'm not.

Congrats on the finish ;)

[virdant]

Thank you for reading ^^

Yoochun and Jaejoong's meeting really is the climax of the fic--it's tension that's been strung through since chapter 3, and so I'm glad it had an emotional effect. ^^

It is rather confusing, because there's so many different plots going on at the same time. It confused me when I was writing it, but the plot twists are hard to understand, especially in the way I separated scenes.

Thank you ^^ I'm glad I'm finished.

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[mashluciano]

Hi... so thank for writing... :x

I hope you don't mind if I ask for your permission to translate your fic into Vietnamese and post on a site.

Here is the link: http://www.tvxq-un-cps.com/f@rum/index.php

I of course credit full and give link back to your live journal so please don't worry about the copyright ^^

Thanks a lot.

Re: ^______^

[virdant]

Thank you for reading :)

I don't mind at all, as long as you credit and everything. I'd like to have a link to it when you're done too. :)