fic - Johnny's and Associates - The Choices We Make

Jul 07, 2010 18:01

Title: The Choices We Make
Author: virdant
Length: 3303 words; one-shot
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, gen
Pairing: Nakamaru/Junno if you read between the lines (and tilt your head to the left)
Summary: Junno is a hitman. Nakamaru is an undercover cop.
Warning: Character death.
Notes: Written for the JE AU meme, prompt here. Re-posted here because I'm kinda ( Read more... )

fandom: johnny's & associates, genre: au, multi-part: hitman!au, pairing: j&a nakamaru/taguchi, genre: general, one-shot

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Comments 15

matchynishi July 8 2010, 03:32:07 UTC
:( :( :( this is amazing. :( :( :( nakamaru. :((((((((( junno is so ;lkja;f;laskdja i have no words.

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virdant July 8 2010, 03:41:12 UTC
Thank you for reading! :) I'm really glad you liked it. :)

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luna_silverwolf July 9 2010, 04:32:35 UTC
This was excellent! You need to make it into a series!

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virdant July 9 2010, 06:06:21 UTC
Thank you for reading :) I'm glad you liked it.

I actually wrote a short side-story in this 'verse. If you're interested, you can find it here

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animesempaigirl July 9 2010, 04:57:39 UTC
Beautiful. Just beautiful.

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virdant July 9 2010, 06:06:35 UTC
Thank you for reading. :) I'm really glad you like it. :)

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krysyuy July 9 2010, 06:19:52 UTC
Wow. Chilling. O.O

I love well-written AUs because I enjoy seeing how authors bend real facts to suit their AU and what roles they assign JE members. All the little details were awesome... like Yamapi being Commissioner and his connections to Jin and Shuuji/Kame, the Shuuji undercover thing, the Juniors, Kisumai... And Kanjani being KAT-TUN's rivals in the gang world. Oh, and Kusano! And Chinen being in the Traffic Bureau. Oh, also Junno changing his hair color from blond to brown! (---> Yes, I care about this, lol.) Etc, etc, etc. So many cool details I loved. Really interested in Ryo's role as well and whether or not he's dirty.

And ohmygosh, the Maru/Junno... D: D: D: Maru... how, after meeting KT, there were two sides battling inside him. Like he belonged, but didn't. ;_____;

Btw, Junno is freakin' scary as a hitman. O.O

I really enjoyed this. Great work. :) ♥

P.S. Just a little typo: "[...] Junno says as he carefully lays out out six knives in a row." - extra 'out'

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virdant July 9 2010, 06:34:10 UTC
Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it. :) I'm really really glad you enjoyed all the details :) Haha, I tried really hard to build the world so it's a vivid one, so I'm glad you appreciated it. :)

Ryo.... I'm still trying to figure out his place in this world too. He confuses me.

And Junno switching hair color is important! XD I'm glad you enjoyed all of it, and Junno's characterization and Nakamaru's dilemma and everything. Thank you for such a wonderful comment! ♥

Thank you for pointing that out! I've fixed it. ♥ This is what I get for not proof-reading as well as I should have. XD

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jtriskell July 9 2010, 17:18:14 UTC
virdant July 9 2010, 23:31:22 UTC
Thank you for reading. :) I'm glad you liked it. ^^

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