Le Tourbillon de la Vie (10/12)

[visiblemarket]

Title: Le Tourbillon de la Vie
Characters: Claude, Sandra, an occasional OC or two
Pairings: Vague and one-sided Claude/Sandra, vague Claude/Noah if you really squint.
Rating: PG13
Warnings: Language, violence, wordiness. The usual.
Word Count: 634
Spoilers: In this part not terribly much but for the story overall it really helps to have read the

Comments

[ricestorm]

A prologue of perfect steaminess and then a Sandra/Claude caper in Paris? This is too awesome! Their dialogue is adorable and classy, and I especially loved Sandra calling out Claude. Actually Sandra in general is a kickass partner, maybe moreso than a certain smug-but-still-green rookie ;) Nice job.

[visiblemarket]

Actually Sandra in general is a kickass partner, maybe moreso than a certain smug-but-still-green rookie

Sandra is just awesome-sauce ;)

And oh my god, your icon. Noah seriously looks like he's just discovered that unfortunate fact.

Thank you!

[lotus0kid]

Oh Claude! So worried for your lover best friend rookie you don't even notice your own injury. Luckily he has Sandra to take care of things from here, which I'm positive she's totally capable of doing with maybe a little help from Jean. And Sandra! Man, Noah's lucky. He's got one partner willing to take a bullet for him, and another willing to fire one. Dude's got it made.

[visiblemarket]

Oh Claude indeed. He's such a sweet heart. And also kind of dense sometimes, especially concerning his lover best friend rookie and his lover best friend rookie's wife. Wow, that's a sentence you don't hear very often.

Noah is so lucky and deserves none of it. Goes on to shoot one partner and get the other mindwiped. That is just so not cool.

Thank you!

[lotus0kid]

Eh, I wouldn't call it dense so much as insecure. Unwilling to either acknowledge his own feelings or contemplate the possibility they might be returned by his lover best friend rookie and his lover's best friend's rookie's wife, for fear of embarrassment and rejection. Poor baby.

Not at all.

Welcome!

[visiblemarket]

Unwilling to either acknowledge his own feelings or contemplate the possibility they might be returned by his lover best friend rookie and his lover's best friend's rookie's wife, for fear of embarrassment and rejection

Heh. Just wait till you read the end.

Why can't you just be cool, Noah?! He ruins everything!

Oh my god, lj is being screwy with comment notifications again. Damn.

[c_quinn]

So last night I had this crazy dream; of Claude, in Paris, kidnapping this little five-year-old with big eyes and funny bangs. There was a car chase. And people in berets. It was very exciting.

When I woke up, I went, Visiblemarket!

I then proceeded to catch up on all the chapters I've missed over these last few days.

Your Sandra continues to impress. You've managed to capture what they've been giving us on the show recently: competent, compassionate and not above sarcasm. Wonderful.

And, of course, Claude. He's fantastic as usual.

Great work!

[visiblemarket]

of Claude, in Paris, kidnapping this little five-year-old with big eyes and funny bangs. There was a car chase. And people in berets. It was very exciting.

Oh crap. You do these things on purpose, don't you?

I mean...that was a very nice comment. It's good to know I have infiltrated your dreams.

Claude is awesome but makes me sad.

Thank you!

[c_quinn]

Oh crap. You do these things on purpose, don't you?

Oh... are you taking it? Because I was kinda considering it myself...

[visiblemarket]

No! No! You take it! I'd much rather you than me, god.