I liked the balance of the sad and the sweet, the way that you mixed up the horrible family life of the Winchesters with the deep love that Dean and Sam have for each other. And then the Dean/Cas love story- I really liked that as well.
Sam and Ava had a really cool relationship. I liked the comparison with his old friends, and then Ava.
I was wondering if this was a stand alone story or if you were planning to make this a series? I was curious if you were going to expand on Sam's weird Dean/Cas dreams, or if his non-sexual cuddling with Ava was leading anywhere specific beyond just Sam being able to have female friends without it needing to be sexual.
As sad as the situation is, I really liked the world that you created here. I think Dean's past was really rich and while I wouldn't have come up with librarian as a Dean-like profession on my own, it really does fit him here.
I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it. Thank you for the wonderful comments!
I don't plan on writing more. What really happened was that I ran out of time. *laughs* I really am a slow writer and finished so late that I didn't have time to address a few points like the dreams (which I chalk up to Sam being preoccupied with Dean and Cas) and his relationship with Ava.
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I liked the balance of the sad and the sweet, the way that you mixed up the horrible family life of the Winchesters with the deep love that Dean and Sam have for each other. And then the Dean/Cas love story- I really liked that as well.
Sam and Ava had a really cool relationship. I liked the comparison with his old friends, and then Ava.
I was wondering if this was a stand alone story or if you were planning to make this a series? I was curious if you were going to expand on Sam's weird Dean/Cas dreams, or if his non-sexual cuddling with Ava was leading anywhere specific beyond just Sam being able to have female friends without it needing to be sexual.
As sad as the situation is, I really liked the world that you created here. I think Dean's past was really rich and while I wouldn't have come up with librarian as a Dean-like profession on my own, it really does fit him here.
Thanks for posting such a great story!
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I don't plan on writing more. What really happened was that I ran out of time. *laughs* I really am a slow writer and finished so late that I didn't have time to address a few points like the dreams (which I chalk up to Sam being preoccupied with Dean and Cas) and his relationship with Ava.
Thank you again for the comments! :)
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