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visionunwanted

Identity - Chapter Four

Jul 14, 2011 05:27

Comments 5

freakingdork July 18 2011, 01:44:22 UTC

Awwwww...so much tension, I love it.

Also, I'm like...ridiculously in love with this line: "There was no uncomfortable tension in staring at tea."

visionunwanted July 18 2011, 06:23:18 UTC

Aww, thank you darling!

just_jasper July 19 2011, 23:50:34 UTC

They were both so tense throughout this every line I wondered if they'd just fall apart. Great chapter, I can't wait for more.

visionunwanted July 20 2011, 09:57:14 UTC

Thankyooou so many times over <3 <3 <3

presidentmlissa September 8 2011, 17:42:41 UTC

I just came across this series (tardy to the party) and I do hope you'll continue. I've never read anything like this before! It's like a breath of fresh air, and so beautifully written. I'm dying to know how this story will evolve.