FIC: We Fat Ourselves For Maggots

Sep 18, 2004 23:08

Title: We Fat Ourselves For Maggots
Author: vissy
Fandom: Death Note
Pairing: Ryuuku/Raito. Sort of.
Summary: Ryuuku watches over his family.
Spoilers: I've read up to part 32.
Rating: R
Disclaimer: These characters are the intellectual property of Ooba Tsugumi and Obata Takeshi. I intend no copyright infringement and make no money.
Notes: Written for shanalle' ( Read more... )

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darkeyedwolf September 18 2004, 20:22:41 UTC
I don't really have anything to add that hasn't already been said -- I love the quiet, calm atmosphere of this, the way we get a peek inside Ryuuku's head and OH MAN, the knee thing was incredible. Especially love If Raito sickens with sleeplessness and chills, his sufferings may prove interesting. Ryuuku knows this and covers him still. This is how the rise of affection inside him for Raito bares itself. and Sachiko making slow, familiar love to her drowsy husband. Mmm. Gorgeous imagery.

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stereonights September 19 2004, 19:50:23 UTC
Easily, easily the best DN fic I have ever read, my own included, which I, as an egoist, happen to think are pretty great. You are fearless in a way that makes me wonder what would happen if Freud and Kurt Vonnegut had a fanfic-writing lovechild.

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theboxization March 2 2005, 22:00:16 UTC
Best compliment ever, and I highly agree.

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borntohula September 19 2004, 20:41:14 UTC
Jeeeesus. You are awesome.

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memlu September 20 2004, 18:34:13 UTC
Like stereonights said, this is easily the best Death Note fic I've read. This is fantastic and so terribly in-character. Brilliant.

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lebateleur February 23 2005, 14:46:41 UTC
Heya. I've been putting together a list of DN fic links for a friend, and I realised I've never commented on this fic, so let me do so now.

It's perfect. I love everything about it from the spareness of the prose to the spot-on characterisations, to the way that Ryuk's state of mind is so accessible, but so unhuman. Thanks for writing it.

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