Dizzying...rather...yet...satisfying?

[vista_rotta]

I wake up breathing A's some days
And other days it's B's
And though I love the taste of both
The remainder will displease

Some day I'll have to choose between
The two and and stand at ease
But until then, again and again
I'll be breathing A's and B's

Comments

[plaid_nimja]

I really admire this poem. Aaand I believe it would suit your [big]children's story splendidly, if you so choose to include it.

[kyramarie]

Has a certain Shel Silverstein feel to it. I like!

[livelydirt]

that's exactly what I was going to put, agree with kyra!