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Trigger #10

Feb 23, 2012 02:18

Title: Clean
Original
Author: charisstoma
Pairings: none
Rating: G
Disclaimer: none
Notes: Water and I have a love/hate relationship. Okay I have a water phobia and water is sneaky.

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#10

Comments 7

mee_eep February 23 2012, 10:42:58 UTC

Welcome to a new world of prompts! *sits comfy and waits*

Lot of symbolism woven through this. Feels contemplative. Somehow I'm less sure I want to run a bath now though :/ maybe later ;)

I like how that ending could have double meaning: does she leave this life by killing herself or by washing away the 'dirt' and starting a new life once she stepped out of the bath, it could mean either. As she chose to shower I assume she chose a new life :)

charisstoma February 24 2012, 02:06:45 UTC

Yes, sit comfortably and wait. *evil laugh* It makes it easier to find you.

I don't like baths. I like showers. *grins* That didn't come through at all, I can see. *laughs*

I like double meanings and that was what I was aiming for here. So success! I'm glad you liked it and you can choose whichever ending you want. It's open ended. *smiles*

Were-mouse.

mee_eep February 24 2012, 13:37:39 UTC

Your preferance was clear :)

Glad I was reading it right :) I thought it could go both ways.

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charisstoma February 24 2012, 02:01:51 UTC

*SMILES*
Thank you.
I've been there but it's taken me many years. Don't know if I'm healing yet but it's ironic that this was written after a 3 day visit from my ex, where he stayed with us.

When we were married he was the agnostic and I was the church goer. Now he's refound God and wanted to attend a local church service. WHO IS THIS MAN?
I went with him this last Sunday. Culture shock. I haven't been to a church service for years. It was odd to do my prayers in a public forum. It is much more personal what my son and I have been doing.

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charisstoma February 24 2012, 01:53:03 UTC

Yes, you do need to start writing bits here again. It's a lonely echoing place.
Thank you, I think it'll be nice to play here too.

a- roooooooooosqueak.

saskia399 February 23 2012, 14:22:35 UTC

Pain and Healing...Hurt and Hope *HUGS*

Beautiful

charisstoma February 24 2012, 01:51:20 UTC

Yea! YOu liked it. If anyone has the professional view of it, it would be you telling me that this was a good fic.

Thank you. *hugs back*